amazing chapter, im falling in love with it and i cant wait to see how they move past this.
i have to stop say oh god, i cant stop myself. Im glad its not entirely au, in that she was a part of the feudal era and knew Sesshoumaru before. it will probably help her. I loved how you described the fifth floor; the way the doctor spoke about her having all thos personel with her and her reaction, just perfect. And the look in his eyes, poor thing. i have to see how this ends.
Oh my god, what an introduction. I feel so sorry for him, his kids, his mate, his home, definitely enough to drive anyone mad. I just hope it gets better for him.
ooh boy... seems like things are heating up.
I wonder if he'll somehow figure out she's been having the same dreams... and what his reaction will be...
OOOOOOO i LOVE IT! I cant wait for more :)
Naomi (Chapter 15) - Wed 23 Feb 2011
OMIGODDD IT WASNT A DREAAAAM....or it was? Or a shared one? >.>
I'm so crazy to find out who exactly Onishi is...unless I missed it somewhere...eep!
Another great chapter.<3
Hairann (Chapter 1) - Mon 21 Feb 2011
Congratulations, Asylum has won second place best darkfic/horror for the 4th Quarter 2010 at Dokuga. You can find your winner banner here: http://www.dokuga.com/images/awards/banners/13/7/3070.png Congrats again and keep up the great work!
Wow...I have truly found a masterpiece here. I actually teared up while reading this. Sesshomaru's situation is so tragic...I hope Kagome can help him eventually. I'm wondering about her boss and if there is more to him than we know!
As awful as it sounds, I actually wonder if it wasn't a little selfish of Kagome for saving his life after the attempted suicide. Sesshomaru's life consisted of nothing but horrible pain and loneliness which he lived in day after day, and yet she brought him back after he could have crossed over and been with his family in the afterlife. Of course, were it someone I loved, I would probably try to save them, too no matter what. I think we're all a bit selfish in that way.
I also like the way you describe Sesshomaru's mate and his children. It's nice to know that at one time in his life, he did experience happiness and have a family. I think that the manga cut Sesshomaru short on the deal. They showed Kagome and Inuyasha together, but what about Sesshomaru and his life? I'd hate to think that he'd be stuck in the company of a warty toad forever.
But...I'm RAMBLING! Sorry. I LOVE your story. Please add more chapters soon!! I am anxious to read the next chapter. Thanks for sharing this!
candi (Chapter 4) - Mon 14 Feb 2011
dang that was a cliffy! lucky for me theres more chapters to read! huzzah! whoa this is so good! i'm wondering just what's going to happena dn i'm kept at the edge of my chair reading this!
candi (Chapter 3) - Mon 14 Feb 2011
Oh my god! this chapter was amazing! and sesshomaru! and Kagome! Just wow! wow! i thought it was so good, poor Kagome though to knowo who he was and then have to hear that and know who he was talking about! poor kags! i can't wait to read the next chapter! ^_^
candi (Chapter 2) - Mon 14 Feb 2011
Whoa! Go Kagome for being awesome! but wow i wonder what happened to the rest of the demon world if Kagome doesn't think they exist anymore. really nice chapter as usual! ^_^ I loved it!
candi (Chapter 1) - Mon 14 Feb 2011
Ohmehgaw! that was beautifully written and captivating and so unbelievably sad that i came close to crying! oh but i loved it!
sesshylover (Chapter 5) - Sat 12 Feb 2011
you are a great writer this the first time reading this story and i choose to read this chapter and it made me cry you have a great talent here!! i will read this story from the begging! and i hope kagome is able to help sesshomaru
hope_midnight (Chapter 14) - Sat 12 Feb 2011
I love this story, its amazing, please update soon.
Beautiful chapter. I especially love the ending. Please update soon!
REDWOLF (Chapter 14) - Fri 11 Feb 2011
Great chapter...in a way I feel more sorry for Kagome.Now Sesshoumaru placed his mate's necklace on Kagome and in some way (at least to me) it is almost like the Kikyo/Kagome situation where she was always being compared to Kikyo. I just hope Sesshoumaru just doesn't see her as a replacement for his lost mate. That Kagome and his dead mate are the same, unless they are something to that.....now, that would be interesting. Dog-gon-it!! Now, I went and confused myself...my head hurts from thinking this one out......@_@..... There is so much more to this necklace stuff, i'll bet.
Oh, I just love this story, I so look forward to your updates, I'll have to re-read to see if I missed something. I am still very untrusting of that other doctor, sometimes I feel like he is a youkai too that knows how to hide his powers, but, I could be wrong.
Thanks for updating, I was having a bad day, and this was a pick-me-up. :)
jgem (Chapter 14) - Fri 11 Feb 2011
Wow! Another great chapter...if you struggled, it didn't show. You've really done an excellent job with your story. No pressure, right?
I also wanted to add that it's so sweet how you always apologize for how tardy your chapters are. I think most of us understand that real life takes precedent and inspiration doesn't always come easily. While this reader would love to see the next chapter because the story is riveting, I don't mind waiting for a good thing.
Hopefully the next chapter won't be as difficult for you to write and will just flow.
oh. my. god. Really... I should be sleeping, as my one month old son is FINALLY asleep for a change, but once I started reading this, I couldn't stop. I feel lots of twists and surprises ahead for us. Cant wait for an update. I have you on alerts now. yay!
wow this story is just amazing! Im hooked!! I cant wait for the next update!!
Eve (Chapter 14) - Thu 10 Feb 2011
I LOVE this story- well worth the wait - do not worry - life is always part of what makes us us. hehehe Keep up the GREAT work and I look forward to the next WONDERFUL Chapter!
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