Oh boy! I am really into this story. Sesshoumaru's mind is really messed up and Kagome is going to have a tough job in working to heal him. Too bad, she can't talk as freely as she'd like with him. Also, he must have lost some of his powers somewhere along the way since they were able to capture him and then subdue him. Otherwise if he did not want to confront them, he could have used his youki cloud or orbed away. Nothing was mentioned about him using his whips or acid/poison. Nor about his claws, fangs, markings, or his eyes going red. Has he even tried to transform?
I know, I'm full of questions which I'm sure you will eventually answer. I also bet the doctor is going to get more suspicious about her and do some research and investigation. I think it would be good for him to know as long as he is willing to work with her and give her free reign.
jgem (Chapter 1) - Mon 13 Sep 2010
Wow! Who wouldn't loose it after seeing their family being put through such torture as a message to them.
Your story is off to a very intriguing start and lots of nice little "Whys" and "How comes" to make me come back for more.
Madison (Chapter 4) - Mon 13 Sep 2010
Of course. Now he wants to allow Kagome to go to the maximum security area. *roll eyes*
Though, I'm glad Sesshomaru somewhat allowed her in. Granted most of it is because he remembers her, and out of craziness but nonetheless. I'm almost afraid that he'll attack her! Yet I don't think that would make her give up. Nice writing of crazy Sesshybaby. I really like the under meanings of everything he says.
Now I wonder how it's Kagome's fault!
GAH!
Feminafures (Chapter 4) - Mon 13 Sep 2010
I was feeling a bit rundown and tired today from work. It was a wonderful gift to see another chapter of your story. Your writing style is easy to follow and hooks you right into the story. I'm always left wanting more.
Dreamerzlove (Chapter 4) - Mon 13 Sep 2010
*gasp for breath after holding it* i LOVE your plunnies! (btw sorry im not logged in my phone wont let me and its the only internet i have) this story is.. wow o.o and Dream wants to and shall be waiting to read more ^.^ because you are an awesome author and one of my favs ^.^ ... :D
Banana (Chapter 4) - Mon 13 Sep 2010
Oh poor kagome, more questions than answers. I wonder if she brought the drawings? She could ask who they are
be even better if they'd let her talk ot him alone but that's not reasonable I guess. HNNNN....
Madison (Chapter 3) - Mon 13 Sep 2010
Ohmygod.
Can you say that was one heck of a meeting huh? Well, re-meeting. See, I can totally picture Sesshomaru being this violent. But considering his strength, the security must be tight as hell. I dont think Kagome will bring back good memories for him, though.
Well, I think he scared her enough huh. He blames her for what happened? Gosh, that's gonna be a hard one to get over. I can't wait to get all the background of Kagome and Inuyasha's story!
Banana (Chapter 3) - Sun 12 Sep 2010
omgmore please! lol
*whimpers*
Lexie (Chapter 3) - Sun 12 Sep 2010
oh no! inuyasha? poor Sesshy, poor Kags
please to be updating im loving it!!
Feminafures (Chapter 3) - Sun 12 Sep 2010
Oooh nice update. I'm eager to see what Sesshomaru will do now that he knows about Kagome.
NA (Chapter 3) - Sat 11 Sep 2010
SOOOOO interesting, great job, update soon.
Madison (Chapter 2) - Sat 11 Sep 2010
Nicely done! You've got me even more excited than before with all of this!
I like how she still doesn't know it's him, but felt the aura. Oh boy, she's gonna get in trouble trying to investigate isn't she? Their meeting won't be pretty!
I adore this story! =3
Very original in terms of plot, I haven't seen this done too often. Please continue, I will be anxiously waiting for a new chapter.
Lexie (Chapter 2) - Sat 11 Sep 2010
awesomeness!
please to be updating quickly!!!
Chelsea H (Chapter 2) - Sat 11 Sep 2010
Well...........that was a powerful way to start a story. I can tell this is gonna be an awesome story already :)
very well writen and quite the original story you have here. cant wait forthere to be more. sorry did this review on my phone.v
i am in love with your story. i can't wait until you write more.
I just had to add a couple more comments. I agree with one of your previous reviewers about the Japanese belief in suicide but if he had commited sepuku (I believe it's called), there would be no story. Also, the readers needed to know all the horrible details of the deaths so we would better understand why his mind became damaged.
Wow!! The plot of this story is so different from anything I've ever read. It was so horrible what happened to his family. I can understand it sending him over the edge. I'm very curious about his life after he disappeared into the mountains and how he came to be there. I'm sure Kagome will slowly unearth all this information as she helps him to regain his sanity.
Banana (Chapter 1) - Fri 10 Sep 2010
Again lovvee it. I think this would be one of those stories that if I found completed, I would read in one night lol
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