I really hope that this isn't the end of you story. I have been addicted to the storyline from the start. I maybe a little morbid, but the death was needed and i believe that a happy ending should not be so easily won. But is should be earned through a fight in some aspects like searching the endless seas for a cure or traveling across the world after you completely F'ed up a relationship. Your story is truly interesting and thought provoking. Can't wait to read the next chapter. I wish you much success with your writing.
you are fantastic love. I tell you that the way you wrote it told me that it wasn't the end, and I love the way you wove that song in there. It's one of my favorites. XD
I love how it took her death to make him surrender to his heart.
Rin (Chapter 19) - Thu 24 Feb 2011
Love your story, sad but I hope it will be a happy ending..so who was the person at the end with them?
*cries like a baby*
THIS is the fanart chapter for sure. I was having a hard time picking but then you made it easy!
So I'm sitting here reading and balling my eyes out, praying that she wont die, knowing that she will. You have crafted one of the most emotionally taxing stories I have ever read and let me say that is a true compliment. I'm sitting on pins and needles for the next chapter.
Lady Lillian (Chapter 1) - Wed 23 Feb 2011
to: ??
brain tumors do in fact cause memory loss and can cause blindness depending where the tumors are located and what functions of the brain are affected by the cancer my sister just passed away after fighting for the past 4 years and her final days she was unable to communicate nor remember who she herself was. unfortunately any problems invovling the brain can cause untold problems with all the other aspects of your body from head to toe your brain is invovled with everything.
?? (Chapter 18) - Wed 23 Feb 2011
I'm pretty sure Cancer doesn't cause Blindness...or memory-loss. What is going on, the story is getting all weird.
UGH! I'm gonna need the tissues next update, aren't I? As if I didn't need them for this one. *sniffle*
Poor Kagome and Sesshomaru. I hope he finds an answer, and SOON!
powerful. intense... looking forward to the next.
@_@ oh no!!!! *cries* this is so sad! And I just know it's not gonna be a happeh ending >.< but i still want to know what happens! PLease update sooN!
Nilee1 (Chapter 18) - Tue 22 Feb 2011
I will keep reading this story eve though it makes me cry.
This is such a great story. I can't wait for the next update.
Anna (Chapter 18) - Tue 22 Feb 2011
Oh my, poor kagome T_T
*is very sad now*
Lady Lillian (Chapter 18) - Tue 22 Feb 2011
I have been reading your story and sadly just recently I lost my sister to brain cancer this last chapter struck me so hard as her last few weeks were rought with the same it tore my heart up when I would see her and she did not recognize me the anger she had towards herself for not being able to remember even little things she was an artist and a nurse I like your story and the fact you are going to give it a happy ending is all the better I think I will think of my sister in Kagome's place at the end just so she can still be here.
rm (Chapter 18) - Tue 22 Feb 2011
please dont kill her...
Nyuka (Chapter 17) - Thu 17 Feb 2011
I was happy-ish but the angst certainly didn't leave, its just so messed up...will tensaga be able to help at all? I hope so.....Come On this is the Feudal era the time of magic and unorthodox healling Kagome has to be able to find a way to stay alive. What if its Kikyo, what if because she doesn't have her whole soul she is dieing of cancer, I mean its a go a reason as any...XP.......Nyuka
I completely agree. A break in the angst gives the readers a chance to breath and I think it allows them to better absorb the material to come. Great job on this chapter. It really was a beautiful vignette. You really captured the peace and contentment of finding joy in a moment...even though there are harder issues waiting on the outskirts. Very well done. Keep up the good work!
this is so sad! And i just know it isn't going to end well... *sigh* anywho great job and i can't wait to see the ending, happy or sad!
this was a really good chapter and i hope you update soon
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