i'm really liking this story rose! the whole angle of kagome having cancer is so fascinating and really pulled me in!! ^-^ I am so anxious to find out what happens next!! Especially with the twist you pulled at the end!! just BAM hit by a bus. Why would you hit me with a bus? *giggle*
You write very well and have presented this story so nicely! I stumbled upon it and i couldn't keep myself from going to read it and here i am writing a review! ^-^
I have greatly liked the chapters so far, i especially like that you found a way to have rin in the story. She's so cute ^ 3^ Seriously curious about what's going to happen with inuyasha now that he returns with a sudden love proclaimation! *boggled mind* OH MY GOSH is this all a dream??? 0-o I need to know these things.
Also at one point you mentioned wanting help with other names for things, i can help if you'd like! Just message meh > 3 <
Need more please. *wants*
fatcatmom (Chapter 9) - Tue 30 Nov 2010
Very well written and moving story. I love the little details of how you capture a slice of life in the day of a terminally ill person. Please update soon: I can't wait to see where this goes...and I will have a box of tissues handy.
It was an awesome chapter. I loved it.
I look forward to the next.
I kept awwwing and squeeling throughout the chapter.. be it Rin's cuteness or Sesshoumaru's thoughts and actions. I simply loved it.
martha (Chapter 8) - Tue 23 Nov 2010
Ahh a nice family dinner. lol wasn't there gonna be music? just curious thanks for the update through.
I really liked this chapter. Though I'm curious to when Sango and Mirko will find out where she is.
I liked Yura's explaination of how to get around. Csn't wait to see what happens next.
Remembered this one too! XD I have to say too, because I don't think I have yet. If you kill off Kagome at the end of this, I will cry and throw man eating pillows at you. .... Just sayin. <.< But, I just got an email from you with more chapters in it, so off to beta land with me! <3
Rissa (Chapter 6) - Thu 04 Nov 2010
I'm really loving this story and wanna know more, but i'll have to wait for the next update. Keep it up!
Angel's Wings (Chapter 6) - Wed 03 Nov 2010
I am very happy that you decided to come back and start posting this story since it used to be one of my favorites. I do enjoy it since it is very well written and very interesting. I actually came along it on ff. net I think and I was very sad when it was not continued. But you came back and I hope you will keep going.
Anyway, take care and thanks for putting it here...
Angel
chavy (Chapter 6) - Wed 03 Nov 2010
nicely written, looking forward to see how the story turns out.
Poor Kags :( Don't give up! Thanks for the update. I thought the flashback was good. It gave more back story. Keep up the good work!
Good revision ^^d Subtle yet I think fits the tone of the situation much better. Great job! Keep up the good work.
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