I just started this UNBELIEVABLY AMAZING STORY!!! I honestly had to re-read this chapter twice because couldn't read the words through my tears. I LOVE that Kagome has become an Avenging, but Compassionate Kami. You didn't portray her transformation as cheesy and overdone. I apprieciate that talet so much. The songs you choose fit perfectly with your storyline and enhance the intense feelings it prompts from the audience. Please, Please , Please continue!!!! Thank you for this amazing piece of work,
~Mae
I just started this UNBELIEVABLY AMAZING STORY!!! I honestly had to re-read this chapter twice because couldn't read the words through my tears. I LOVE that Kagome has become an Avenging, but Compassionate Kami. You didn't portray her transformation as cheesy and overdone. I apprieciate that talet so much. The songs you choose fit perfectly with your storyline and enhance the intense feelings it prompts from the audience. Please, Please , Please continue!!!! Thank you for this amazing piece of work,
~Mae
Marifer (Chapter 11) - Wed 15 Sep 2010
This was definitely a heartbreaking chapter and caused me to cry. It was very well written and the song you picked for it enhanced what was going on in the chapter amazingly.
"Deliver Us" Is from the Prince of Egypt which is actually from DreamWorks , not Disney.
iloveprettysilverhair (Chapter 11) - Wed 15 Sep 2010
What a heart breaking chapter! At least it had bittersweet ending, I don't think Sesshoumaru will ever let Kagome go now. Nor Rin for that matter :)
Well done, it was nice to see an update!
It is a rare fan fic that can make me cry, and this chapter did it. It was beautiful in its horror and in its peace. Well written!
Ceysna (Chapter 10) - Fri 10 Sep 2010
If reviews are you fuel then go baby go! This story is really intense, I like it! keep it coming!! please?
So many good fics in my slow exploration of Dokuga. I can't wait for the next update! This story is very captivating!
Wow, great chapter! I am wondering though, you marked it complete but this most recent chapter leaves so much left to answer about dealing with the Eastern Dragons.
I hope you continue this!
ouch now that naraku is dead what happens, sesshoumaru's lands are taken... most be rough, but at least we have some kagome and sesshoumaru thing going on... i hope all goes well in this flight and nothing too drastic...
iloveprettysilverhair (Chapter 10) - Thu 09 Sep 2010
Just picked up this story tonight, and I must say it is absolutely captivating. I love the strong, powerful Kagome of this story. She and Sesshoumaru make a powerful couple and that scene on his cloud was very sexy.
Definitely looking forward to more! Keep up the wonderful work :D
nice job on the ending and Naraku is finally no more!! when are the romance going to be b/w sess and kagome.... kagome turned out to be such a fighter, strong willed and more! nice job again and keep up the great work!!
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