What happened to the baby dragons? What about the elders? Did the dragon clan ever do better and turn back to peace? I need to know!!! Please!!!!!!

Interesting 

This is really beautiful, it was calming to read. The way you wrote about the elements was fun to think about, as someone who has studied psychology and some sociology and mythology the way you wrote about them was really interesting and entertaining!

The story is well mesh in all the person affected by the spider but it seems that it's missing the ending.   The attack to the citadel, the black dragons, the reconstruction and the dragon citadel?  Few loose end up for the next chapters  or a new story?   It is a shame that you have abandon the stories?  You are good.

I  think you over did the scene.  Doesn't kagome way of forgiveness would set him free.  Love your work. :):)

So upset it stops here!

I really like this story but I thought that when I read this before there was an out of place piano experience along with it. I prefer this version.

is this really the end?! oh mah lord! i was so getting into the story too! i loved the character development! i hope you decide to write a sequel/continuation! that would be fantastic!!

This was a good story! I loved every chapter of it. Thanks

OH MY GAWD!!!!!! A-MAZ-IIIIING!!! This story....man!!! I gotta hand it to ya, it was very well written, I loved the plot twists and turns, I loved EVERY SINGLE DETAIL!!! Just awesome, you did a seriously spectacular  job!! You're a wonderful author and I applaude you for the stellar job you did with thisome story. Simplyou a joy to read. Seriously one of my favorites for ever, to read again and again! 

Hope you write many many more amazing stories!!! I look forward to reading them all!!

OMG! Is it over? Tell me its not over!!! This has quickly become my favorite story!!! I love it :-)

Whart??? No epilogue? I liked the story but was disappointed with the ending. I wanted to know what happened after they mated. It needs an epilogue to complete it.

I loved reading this story!

Heartbreak.

Wow. That is an action and emotion packed chapter!

My eyes teared up with the image of Kagome left behind by the others and the separation she felt from them. From there, the emotional roller-coaster continued through that super-hot kiss to the trepidation and dread at the end of the chapter. It's probably a good thing that I don't have to work first thing in the morning tomorrow because this storg could keep me up all night!

Poor Naraku. I didn't quiet see that coming either. However, in it is fierce justice.

Wow. Bet Naraku never saw that coming.

I love the lyrical way you've written about the elements and Kagome's interaction with them.

Holy sh*t! O.o talk about an emotional roller coaster! I was way upset about Rin but got the feeling Kagome would make it right, and she didn't  disappoint. Wow. Hope you eventually write more.

Don't you just love the mokomoko. Don't know if I am spelling it right but Hey I want one! Please update this story!!!!!