why it look like that chapter was repeat twice of same thing

Love this story!!!! *grumbles* (dispite the evil cliffy) Just to let you know, this chapter is repeated 2 times, on the same page.*opps* No biggie.

Can't wait for more!   Please update soon!  *waves cookie*

Rewrite this story under another name without the songs to distract readers from the actual story and I believe you will have more readers and positive reviews. The songs should either be at the beginning of the story or at the ending. With it in between the story it is distracting the reader from the actual storyline and makes the story seem boring in general when it actually isn't. It's a good story so far but I hate what you've done with placing the songs between the story. 

Please hurry with the next chapter..so can't wait..and can I just say...LOVED, LOVED, LOVVVEEDD the little 'heated' interaction between Sesshoumaru and Kagome. Oh yeah. More of that, if you pleaseeee.

This is a beautiful, brillant story and I look foward to more.

I enjoyed it but you left off at a point that was confusing since they were still in the dream world. I can only say that I hope her memory of that awful experience is now gone & they wake with Sess & Rin accepting their roles of father & daughter. I also hope that Sessh realizes that Kagome is no longer human as it seems she's become more of a Kami of sorts & an immortal being with very strong powers & abilities & along with that I really hope he finds himself deeply in love with her mentally ,emotionally & physically. I would also like to find out what everyone else in the group thinks & feels about what Kagome has become...I'm so tired of the disrespect Inuyasha has for Kagome that I hope he sees,understand & accepts that he was very wrong in his treatment of her by treating her in such a demeaning way,always talking down to her & igonoring the her strength & everything she gave him including Kikyo & that he apologizes to her & begs for her forgiveness & begins to treat her as she deserves to be treated along with all the others. I also of course hope that Kagome's ability makes it possible to stop the war,save all youkai while getting the dragons other youkai to make amends for the pain, suffering & destruction they caused by following a flawed being & that they make up for it by rebuilding his castle,increasing his lands & pledging their allegiance to him & his Mate..of course I want Kagome as his Mate.I hope that due to their abuse of their own powers the Kami's take from the dragons the ability of poison,the control of the dead & the minds of all leaving them with only their strength,ability to fly & produce fire. I really hope that through the will of the Kami's Sessh & Kagome find they are soul mates or such & if he is able to ignore vengeance due to the fact that the war it will bring will wipe out youkai from the earth & kill an enormous amount of humans along with the all they know & most likely destroy the future Kagome comes from & unless he accepts the his love of Kagome & takes her as his mate ,which would give him extremely powerful pups half youkai & half Kami ..also allowing him & kagome to share some abilities making him part Kami (as in the mating process they must share blood combining their souls,minds & bodies) & her part youkai which would make it easier for her to accept the darker part of her being that she's fighting against but his strenght would allow her the balance needed to accept the ability,as they are soul mates,he would also & gain the ability of love which she overflows with....her ability to control nature would allow her to save his lands & they would become a such an enormous powerful couple that youkai & human would flock to them to serve.With combining their selves for life as mates & never taking others they would be immortal changing the future for the better,saving the earth & keeping balance...& allowing hope to live in the world again.

        Of course thats what I'd like to see & I love Sessh & Kagome together. I also have nothing agianst lemons or such but I believe,if I recall correctly from other stories of this author,unless things are changing & growing as everyone does, I think none of the stories contain lemons even lite ones,nor the author believe in writing them so I imagine the mature warning be in regards to the mentioning of rape,war,death & etc.... Of course I don't know that definitely & I love all the stories & the writing & I look forward to what the next chapter will contain. I ,of course, would love to read of Kagome losing her innocence to the man she loves & read of her reactions to & with an intimate & sensual Sessh but only the writer knows.

Please update soon

I really think this is the single most interesting Sess/Kag fanfic I've read!! Please update faster if possible. I'm dying to read the next chapters. Please!!! As yourself, I cannot stand to read any other pairing except Sess/Kag now. ^_^ I'm converted!!

please tell me this story will be continued I'm dying to see where it'll go from here

This story is a masterpiece! I read all that there is and I have cried and laughed along with the characters. You have an amazing gift of writing and I hope that you keep it up! Please update as soon as you can! Thanks!

please tell me there will be more....

Thank you so much for all the wonderful reviews! Of course it isn't finished yet, I'm still working on the next chapter.  Hope to hear more positive input, it is certainly the fuel that keeps me writing!

please tell me this story isn't finished yet & that it will be completed so we can see what comes next , how it ends & what happens with Kagome,does she end up alone,dead,back in the future or with Sessh??? Does Sessh & the group save the rest of his people & the ones who hurt so many & caused such pain???

             I look forward to what will happen next & how this story ends.

Wow . . . wow.

Well, this story is definitely interesting, to say the least :P And I really hope Sesshoumaru tortured the hell out of Rin's rapist. Ugh. Just sickening. And I was amazed at how much happened in only fifteen chapters. Gotta see what happens next! Can't wait for it!

Ah, if that kind of justice could be worked onto rapists these days.

Can't wait for the next update!

wow the story was amazing you only made a couple changes from the songs from the movie prince of egypt but the story so far is really inspiring keep up the great work  

hope everything is ok w/ kagome after the whole ordeal and the transformation!! nice job w/ everything and keep up the great work!! good luck!

Oh my....What a beautiful chapter. That was incredibly stunning. I loved it. Thank you so much for writing this! Please Continue.

~Mae

Wow, that was very moving... I hope they can heal Rin's heart though... Poor child...

I loooove this story keep going please :) update soon