So Kikyo gets to live a little longer....a least Kagome is getting some respect....its too bad Kagome can't trust Sesshomaru....yet....love to see the reactions....
This story is amazing! I really love that you're taking your time and really developing it. You're following through on all your plotlines, having the characters grow, and developing their relationships, creating intrigue and resolving things while still keep things fresh and exciting. That's not easy to do, and you're doing it all seamlessly! Everything that's occured only adds to your story. There's nothing useless, no holes, and you take time to cover each characters background and internal workings.
On a side note, I really appreciate how descriptive you are with detailing the surroundings: the decor, the wardrobes and the character's physical attributes. Being able to visualize where they are, what they look like, what seaon it is, etc etc really adds depth and realism to the characters and their environment.
This story is definitely intriguing, emotional and has heavy hitting themes. Duty over personal want, grief, mouring, friendship, respect, conspiracy....you're really doing an excellent job. There are some typos here an there, but it's nothing that detracts from the bigger picture. I hope you keep doing what you're doing, because this is the best story i've read in quite awhile. I was very sad when I realized I was on the last chapter, lol. I hope you update soon. Keep up the good work!
I've met very few people that were sadistic where Kagome is concerned but you must be slightly towards her. Just don't let her get her ass kicked that's all i beg of you, Shippo will trap a bitch for messing with his mother, hehe.
Your evil that's all i have to say, i was still crying when i started this chapter and my mama even asked me what was wrong with me. Oh, i feel better now though, I can not see Shippo die, everyone else in Inuyasaha can go up in flames but i'll only cry when he dies. So please, no more killing Shippo, i don't care if he comes back, he dies i cry.
NOOO! You got me to actually freaking cry! I'm going to keep reading but I just started bawling and i hate crying! Poor Shippo, crying way more now.
Love the interaction between Sess and Shippo. Can't wait to see where you take this.
roo86 (Chapter 12) - Wed 27 Apr 2011
Thanks for the update. I like that Kagome and Sesshoumaru are talking on an almost equal level. You never fail to write a chapter that surpasses the last. I want MORE!!!!
Takeshi is such an interesting character, will sparks start to fly? Will Kagome defend him? Can't wait to see what happens next!!!
The operative phrase is "can't wait!"
Thanks for the update.
REDWOLF (Chapter 12) - Wed 27 Apr 2011
Well, I hope Kagome kicks some serious butt when she has to fight for her guard ;) I even hope she some how makes Sesshoumaru a little jealous. Sesshoumaru seems so, I don't know, maybe, too duty concern. I mean, he tells Kagome that this other demoness is good for strong pups, but, doesn't seem to want her for anything more. Well, at least, if Kagome can get Sesshoumaru to see her as a love interest, then, she won't have to worry about him straying away. I just like it when Sesshoumaru gets jealous. Great story. I hope you update soon.
Selenay (Chapter 11) - Fri 22 Apr 2011
Yay! Her power responds now! I'm so glad, she got it squared away now! Good chapter, I enjoyed it!
REDWOLF (Chapter 11) - Fri 15 Apr 2011
Seems Kilyo is not long for that world...lol. Great chapter!!!
Sala (Chapter 11) - Fri 15 Apr 2011
Uh oh -- it sounds like Kikyo is going to finally be done in. ;)
kathryn (Chapter 11) - Fri 15 Apr 2011
great story you had me crying in chapter 8 can't wait for next chapter
I am simply in love!! :)
You story is so fresh and interesting and I am straving for the next update.
Please update soon, very quickly!! :)
roo86 (Chapter 11) - Thu 14 Apr 2011
This story gets better and BETTER! Love it. I get so excited when I see it updated. I love the character Takeshi.
Have a great week and can't wait for you to update all your stories,
Thank you.
Anna (Chapter 11) - Thu 14 Apr 2011
I get the feeling Kikyo is going to die... I wonder why?
I really enjoy Kagome kicking ass...hmmm..but what I love the most in your story is the fact that you take your time to build the relationship between Kagome and Sesshoumaru...Awesome! And in general..I have nothing against Kikyo...but right now....she has to give Kagome's soul back one way or another *wink*
By the way...did I tell you that I wouldn't mind at all if you post a new chapter?
silvertigress (Chapter 11) - Thu 14 Apr 2011
You really made the nymph into a phyco! lol. Please update sooooon! I love this story!!!!!!!
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