Alright so I missed my chance to review the last chapter, so I'll go ahead and give you a little run down of that one before I move on to this one ...
The way that Sesshomaru and Inuyasha interacted in the last installment was absolutely perfect. I could clearly see each expression that must have passed over their faces, and the result of your hard work is definitely paying off. I enjoyed the interaction between Sesshomaru and Kagome as well, and I have to say that you're keeping everyone in character very well.
Now, for this chapter ...
Sesshomaru's actions were a shock to me as well, and I'm sure my mother would've asked me if I was alright if she'd come in and seen me staring at the computer screen with my mouth wide open. You do a very good job of portraying emotions and reactions through words, and I have to say that I've never really seen anyone handle an odd acting Sesshomaru as well as you do.
I absolutely adore the "parallel universe" thought that Kagome has, about Sango groping Miroku instead of the other way around. That was hilarious, and I have to commend you for that one - you made me laugh ^_^
All in all, this was a very nice chapter, and I'll be eagerly waiting for the next!
~Aubrey
Diane (Chapter 3) - Thu 19 Aug 2010
Snort! ROTFLMAO I can hardly wait for the next one to see what she puts on next & what Sess does about it.
getbackban (Chapter 3) - Thu 19 Aug 2010
i loved this!cant wait to read more.
Anonymous (Chapter 2) - Thu 19 Aug 2010
Also, someone said it was make do instead of Make Due, but they're wrong. Make Do is two verbs in a row, and therefore wrong.
Anonymous (Chapter 2) - Thu 19 Aug 2010
Super cute! I can't wait til you write another chapter. Maybe about something Sesshomaru doesn't recognize? Like Sandalwood or something exotic. Or maybe just something he knows is super rare.
KitKat (Chapter 2) - Wed 18 Aug 2010
Woooooooot!
Keep it coming! Next time get Sesshomaru to do something even more weird!
And it looks like a certain hanyou *coughs* Inuyasha *coughs* is jealousssssss :D
SEB (Chapter 2) - Wed 18 Aug 2010
Charming story!
*^_^* I really like this!! It's too bad Sesshoumaru was curious enough to see if her mouth also tasted like mint. >:3
I love this idea, please continue soon!!!
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