i love update soon

Oh damn that was hot... if only I were twenty again, lol...

Amber

I love this! There are so many scented products and possibilities for this story. We humans sure love our scents we even made condoms smell good! lol great chapter.

I am so glad I found this fic! It's funny as hell, witty, and utterly adorable!

I'll definately be following this one to it's conclusion!

I am now totally addicted to this little tempting collection. This offering was sublime. Once again you have such a gift for describing the scene so well as to place the reader right into it.

It was amusing how Kagome got lumbered with everyone's water bottles to be refilled but she seemed to take it quite well. I was on tenterhooks awaiting Sesshoumaru's appearance much as Kagome was herself. I love the way you describled him as being always on the edge of her consciousness now, cooling as a breeze on her skin. Lovely words.

"This one...has been curious." he repeated. "He wonders if you taste as good as you smell."

God, made  my toes curl with this simple sentence. So full of promise. Hmmm.

The way you described Sesshoumaru almost kissing Kagome,

"It was more of a...sampling"

Oh it was wonderful so erotic in such  a quiet understated way. Beautiful.

Loved also the description of  a dazed Kagome heading back to camp like a  "big wind up toy". So apt.

Thankyou for your wonderful efforts.

Absolutely gorgeous. The interaction between Sesshoumaru and Kagome made my toes curl. The way you write is just perfect. I love your intense attention to detail, you paint such a clear inviting picture with your words.

The meeting between Sesshoumaru and Kagome was divine.  The way you had him smelling her hair and the look that he gave her  made my toes curl.  Oh so beautiful. Can't wait for next portion.

Amazing. Thankyou so much

wonderful chapter.  So descriptive was your language describing the heat and thirst and the parched lands, I felt thirsty too. Beautiful language.

Love  your detailed descriptions of all the action and reaction between characters particularly between Sesshoumaru and InuYasha and then Sesshoumaru and Kagome.  I really felt InuYasha's frustration at being ignored by Sesshoumaru and the indifference coming from Sesshoumaru was so well described it was palpable.

Once again the close contact that was intimate and yet strangely not intimate at the same time between Sesshoumaru and Kagome was written in such a wonderful way that I absolutely cannot wait to read on.

Beautiful work. Thankyou

I liked your little story very much.  I really love the way you pay such attention to detail, your descriptiong of the scenery, of Kagome and Sesshoumaru and the boar demon were so well  crafted I had no trouble seeing them in my mind at all.

I thought the scene where Sesshoumaru is close up and within kissing distance and yet is only smelling her breath was very tantalising in the way you wrote it. Left  me wishing they had kissed and so looking forward to the next installment. 

Lovely.  Thankyou.

You, ma'am, are just perfect!

This chapter was a mixture of slight hilarity (for me, anyway) and a bit of erotic hinting - a wonderful combination, too! I love the way that you write Kagome's inner thoughts and tirades - you keep her in very good character.

Also, Sesshomaru's behavior is just ... wow! I think I would have nearly wet myself if he'd been that close to my mouth with those fangs of his! His dialogue was very well written and his actions seemed to be spurred on by his curiosity, as well as by what seems to be a budding attraction.

I loved how Kagome went back to camp in a daze, and I was internally laughing my head off while reading about her thinking about how she was bound to trip at some point - that's just classic Kagome ^_^

Anyway, another wonderful one-shot, and you're definitely excused for not updating on time ... My computer hates me too sometimes, so I can understand a late chapter!

Good luck!

~Aubrey

p.s. -  the scene where Sesshomaru gets done "tasting" Kagome and turns her in the right direction was priceless! I could clearly see the movements in my head, and I wanted to be sure that I congratulated you on such vividly winderful imagery ... Bravo!

You know, I almost half expect Kagome to have some scented deodorant. Now that just makes me giggle. I love your story! :3 Can't wait for an update!

aw that was kinda cute lol Very in character as well. Great job!

Too funny.  I was thinking the same thing when I began to read this latest update.  I wondered when we'd get to the lips.  What's next?  Oooo, the possibilities!

Very erotic! I never knew a nonkiss sould be so sexy. Also very unique scene, which I have to give you props for. I wonder what else Kagome has up her sleeve to entice Mr. Curiosity... Will Kagome start intentionally trying to smell yummy? Or perhaps try and refrain from it because she's so intimidated by Sesshomaru and the feelings he's ignighting? I'm also curious if Sesshomaru is only interested in her because she smells of all those futuristic products, or if its the natural Kagome scent and taste underneath that has him drawn in, which the products simply offer an excuse? Maybe the products started the entire thing, but Kagome's own allure is enough to keep him tagging along. Just some of my own curious musings. :)

I love it..Sesshomaru is getting bolder with her...

Hahahahahahahahhahhahahha that's all I really have to say... omg LOL

This is so cute!  I'm glad there is more to come...

I wonder what the next flavor will be ;) pwahahahahaha again you amaze me with another great chapter .

best chappie evah!!!!!!!

lol, I had a feeling lip stuff was coming up next.

wow great chapter! can't wait for the next flavor and body part! wonder what that naught dog is going to do next to that poor lucky girl. =]