I'm beyond shocked by what had happened. Lord of the West your really smth else. But I jusy wished he will listen to her more and respect her decisions more etc. ^^ <3<3<3

"breathe miko"   yummmmmm

i've read your stuff over on ff...  i'm happily rereading this  :)

*blush*

I take it back, he's not a gentleman, he's an ass

I can't tell if he just wants Kagome's body or an actual relationship! 

I'm dieing! Fgfsxgfdxbgfxcvfxbhsxcbgdcgggx

Then, with flowing, graceful motions, he knelt and collected the water bottles that had fallen from her limp fingers and pressed them to her chest, maneuvering her arms to cradle the small load. He gripped her shoulders lightly and turned her in the opposite direction, his hand coming to her back and giving a gentle push.

Such a gentleman lol

Had she not been so busy gawking at Sesshomaru, she would have turned to make sure Sango wasn’t groping Miroku’s backside.

Lol

Why'd you choose honeydew for the lotion scent?  Is that Kagome's favorite?

Sorry, put in a smilinging emoji didn't mean to seem questioning.

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Wow these one shots were delicious.

Love the story and loved, loved, loved the lemon. Soooo hot!

I am so happy it didn't go the route that I had feared... over at FF.Net so many Sesshoumaru/Kagome stories involved rape I just gave up on them until I found this site and so freaking happy your story didn't go downt that dark path.

Now for the scene itself, it was very sensual and hot without getting vulger. Bloody good work and looking forward to the sequal!

I have to admit this chapter made me quite a bit uncomfertable with the level of sexual aggression shown and I so hope the next chapter turns to a more consensual intamacy.

You did Sesshoumaru's thoughts really well and I can't wait to see how it turns from a simple conquest to something with more emotional depth to it.

Oh Goddess this chapter was hilarious and yet very intimate. You're really doing a amazing job with this story.

Oh now this chapter was bloody hot! You did a fantastic job in describing the intimate tasting and Kagome's emotional/physical reactions. And how you wrote Sesshoumaru's actions with the water bottles and small push was really in character for how he's been acting around her in thos story.

LOL... yelp you had me chuckling with this chapter. Especially the "once over" part, that was really well written.

Something else I want to say is I really love how easy your writing style is to read. Even though it's full of vivid descriptions and tangible emotions the words just flow so smoothly together. Really glad there's more of this particuler story and a sequal!