wow...they both are gonna have lovely first impressions aren't they...I can see them telling their kids their story...well when I first met your father when he ran me over with his car...I first met your mother when she tried to kill me in the hospital.
please update soon because I really wanna see her try to kill Fluffy...is Kagome a miko too? that might make the blood have different results too.
man is she SO gonna sue the hospital...and how on earth did they know what she is because of the transfusion...I'm assuming they've made this mistake before.
InuYoukai_goddess (Chapter 1) - Tue 10 Aug 2010
This is a cute start! I hope she is an Inu Youkai. i hate it when authors make kagome a neko youkai or another youkai, and then pair her up with Sesshomaru. Wish you luck with the other chapters
slycats (Chapter 1) - Mon 09 Aug 2010
Looks like the start to a Cute story. Just a little FYI. In one of your paragrphs you used (We've havn't) this would work out to be 'we have have not' Hope you don't mind me telling you about that.
Hpw you update soon.
Tsuki (Chapter 1) - Mon 09 Aug 2010
Cliffy >:[ I really like this so far :) I am really looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work :)
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