An interesting twist...I cant wait for more.
Except for a few grammar and spelling glitches, this is hilarious and really good!! You might consider getting beta to help you with that lol. So funny, poor Kago.
Diane (Chapter 8) - Sun 15 Aug 2010
Umm, what is this supposed to be? It doesn't make much if any sense; well cursed the day her laid car on her ,to be precise.
Tsuki (Chapter 8) - Thu 12 Aug 2010
Instead of women you should say woman. Women is plural and when Sesshomaru says it to just Kagome so it should be woman because she is just one person :D I'm still loving this story tho :D
I like the story but I would recommend getting a beta or at least rereading over everything before you post. Like I said I really do like this story but all of the grammer errors are a real turn off when reading a story. I keep finding misspelled words or words that should be capitalized.
I look forward to upcoming chapters =)
LOL Poor Kagome, has she made any progress though?
jojo661538 (Chapter 7) - Thu 12 Aug 2010
hahaha wow keep up the good work i hope to read more soon ^_^
helikesitheymikey! (Chapter 6) - Thu 12 Aug 2010
methinks she was smart enough to tell people where she was going Fluffy-sama.
*snickers* I love her angry rant!
man it made him look stupid...maybe next time she can get it through his head that his honor is on the line or something...probably the only way to get him to help her. plus isn't there some honor code or something that when you save a person's life you're responsible for them until they naturally die or something? just an idea.
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
patient, my lord.... patient
Tsuki (Chapter 6) - Wed 11 Aug 2010
This story is awesome :) I really like the way you write.
0o0o0o0o so interesting!
You go Kagome, he ows her more than that
I really like this story and idea. I would suggest double checking you chapters for spelling errors though. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Wow what an interesting twist, I cant wait for more.
Tsuki (Chapter 4) - Tue 10 Aug 2010
Haha :) That was a good chapter. I love that you update so much!!!
I HEART THIS STORY! but the only thing i noticed was in chapter one if she had no ID how did they know her name?? O_o
Eve (Chapter 3) - Tue 10 Aug 2010
This is really quite cute. I can't wait to see where you take this story!
Thanks!
kat (Chapter 3) - Tue 10 Aug 2010
XD i likey haha
O_O MORES! hahahah
Tsuki (Chapter 3) - Tue 10 Aug 2010
Ahhhhhhh!!! I freaking love this story!!!
I just think you should look over your chapters more carefully, there was at least one spelling error.
:D Update again soon!!!
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