Praise God you weren't in your lab when they blew it! I will keep you in my prayers, Cloud.

I can see how this was a hard chapter to write, it is very powerful, very strong, very bloody. It's still a good story; I look forward to your next update.

Im so happy you updated! i have been waiting!

This chapter was really good, I'm glad to see that kagome had made contact with sesshomaru and things are starting to change. Lets hope that it keep getting better. 

I really can't can't wait for another update, I want to know what happens when he comes to.

I wonder how Kagome has been getting a lot on his end but Sesshoumaru hasn't been getting a lot on his end. I wonder if they meet at the com/control room (since they will cuz Kagome is being compelled) will Sesshoumaru finally be able to put a face to the feelings. Though better question will that click stop him from doing what he was sent there to do? I can't wait to see what happens next and how three men against 200 is better than 1. must be some plan :)

i liked how you wrote the first part.  it catches you up and makes you feel like you're going mad with Kiren.  very well done.

It was good.

keep up the good work.

so interesting!

cloud, this fanfic is the best I have seen in a long time that has a long plot and makes me want to read and read and read. I love sci-fi and I have never seen Kagome and Sesshoumaru in that genre and I effin love it!! Please write as much as you can and please stay safe. The last chapter said you were in Iraq, so all my beliefs aside, I still wish you peace, happiness and to be safe in Iraq. You have a real gift and I would definitely vote for your fanfic for an award! Take care.

this was really good. I can't wait for the next update!

I didn't think I would be a fan at first look but I have to say you have won me over. This is a great story and I can't wait to continue reading it. Please post again soon!! <3

This is great =)
I like how things are tying together.

I like the "Soldier"esque concept and I must say the little bit of crossover made me a teeny bit happy (ok, so that's gross understatment, I giggled like a school girl who just got her hands on her favorite boy band's newest album. I think you just created the holy trifecta of all that is awesome and manly).The Mecha in me is super happy about Ren and his Hunter!

I really can't wait to see how this turns out!

another riveting chapter.  i ike the slow progression of events; it contributes to the build-up nicely.  eagerly awaiting the next installment!

I really enjoy your story and like Im sure everyone else has said it is quite different and interesting. To think about waht both of them have gone through at such a young age I can't wait to see what happens next and esp how they meet. I think its interesting/will be interesting that Kagome knows about him but he doesn't really know about her. Then there's the whole he wasn't inhibited story to play out along with the side stories of Ren and who he is and Sgt. Raren's betryal. I just can't wait to see where you take things next :)

you may not be happy with this post but i most definately am! i fell in love with the story in the first 2 chapters and am esctatic that you are still continuing it. i hope that the next addition is not long in the making but it takes time to make a masterpiece.

please update as soon as you are able

interesting. I feel really sorry for Ren. so...if his urine is 99.8% water and scentless how can Sessho smell it? unless it's not really scentless I guess...o.O

anyway really interesting and I'm really glad you updated

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Hi, I was just browsing through the fanfictions and read your summary and got hooked after the first chapter.  There is so much going on. I just can't wait till you update again.  I hope your okay over there in Iraq.   Anywho just wanted to let you know you just got youself a new fan (^_^).  See ya next time.

ja ne till next time and keep up the great work.  Keeping my eyes peeled for the next chappie

I totally reread this whole thing today cuz it's been awhile and my brain had forgotten parts of it. Anyway yay I'm so glad you updated and I hope everything is going well for you!!! I really do like this story, it's so different and unique. ^_^ Anywho I can't wait to see what happens next!!

thank you for the update. this is one of the stories that i keep in my favorites section of my web browser and check back at least once a week to see if you update. it is geting really intriguing. cant wait for your next update.

*hanging by her nails for the next chapter* Win Shwin! You've got me whining like a 2-year-old for more... and more... and more... In my opinion you've already won cuz you're a good author.

I'm so happy you updated! I kept checking just to see if the notification hadn't been sent. I really like this story and it seems to be picking up on pace. I can't wait for the next chapter. This chapter was very good, I liked how you explained how Sesshomaru needs to take care of Ren the small details make a difference.