I saw  the  pic  read that  little  bit  and then had to read you fic

which in turn  got me hooked  and no i must poke  you

:PokE:

  and  ask you    to  PLEASE UP DATE SOON

this  is off to a great start

this is amazing. its so good. im completly hooked.

keep up the good work. i cant wait for more.

I have to say that I like your story very much. It is interesting and capitvating. It reminds me a little of Ender's Game or even Ender's Shadow. If you haven't read those, I totaly suggest that you do.

awe thats sad, for a papa to lose his puppy!

Aaaahh, so pretty.

Inutaishou makes me giggle. My dog is like that as well. As soon as it gets hot, she heads for the closest puddle of water.

A nice light-hearted chapter. This is coming along nicely.

Keep up to good work, m'dear.

I absolutely possitively love this story!

Interesting chapter. Good luck with your fan art. It can be a bitch sometimes. I do it for my own works and geeze does it cause problems! It's almost like you can never get it out of your head and onto the page. So, god speed!

Please update soon.

--Gothic Lust

I really like this story. Its so unique! I hope you have another chapter up soon! This story is just wow!

I love Sci-Fi fics. Especially SessKag ones. Those are the absolute best.

It takes real talent to do a Sci-Fi. You're amazing. I'm so enthralled by this story, I wish I had more to read.

I would seriously read this story, not matter how long, until it finished. I'd sit here staring at the screen, and then I'd read it again.

I like this. I really do. And I expect a great many more chapters to come. Great job so far.

I have a feeling this will get an award some day.

this is so dark! though i kidna hope that if and when papa gets a hold of them or kagome they tear that place from top to bottom. i love this fic!

Oh my, I'm really getting into this story. I'm really loving it so far, its so different and your writing style is amazing. I'm loving how your plot is unfolding, I love the setting... I just love everything. please please pleaseeeeeee update sooooon! I look forward to it!

much love!

-sora

I am loving this story! So unique and full of detail, please feel free to keep up the good work :)

Though I rarely like anything that has something to do with child soldiers, this sounds really intriguing.

I miss Kagome's POV. What's she thinking about it, having to know how that boy feels?

Please continue. I really want to read this till the end.

Love it, cant wait for more

awww...Kagome stopped him from killing Mongrel!!....okay the awww was more for him feeling warmth and whatnot....

man is he gonna be confused when he's 18 and has all these urges for Kagome....being he probably has never seen a girl (minus Kagura) before.

please update soon! I just LOVE where this's going!

This is a very interesting story that caught my eye. I like the uniqueness of this. Sesshomaru as a pup growing into a very deadly soldier. This is one story I'm definitely looking out for. Can't wait for the next chapter.

please update!

this has really pulled me in, something alien type stories dont do often

so...I actually love this idea, and the story is well written. Strangely, I keep assuming that the main character is Inuyasha, even though he hasn't been named - I actually went so far as wondering how Inuyasha could have been born as the Heir first, if there was no Sesshoumaru yet - the only reason I'm realizing the "Runt" must be Sesshoumaru is because the story is posted on Dokuga. Maybe it's because I associate the suffering and sense of being outcast with inuyasha, or maybe it's because I am thinking "Mongrel" is Koga, and Koga is Inuyasha's rival.  Anyhow, I look forward to your updates.

I Like your idea its different. I've read something similar but since this is just the beginning you might end up going different. look forward to the next chapter.

love it!!!