This Is Very Intresting ! I'm Very Slow xD So Bare w/ Me , Is Kai The One The Father Tree Connected Kiren's Mind Too ? From What I Gather He Is But They Were Captured & Seperated So It Was Slowly Killing Them Until They Were Put Together & Their Bond Strengthened . I Figured Out Awhile Ago Ren Was Related To Kiren Not Just Because Of The Name But It Was A Couple Things That Pointed To It , I Just Was Trying To Figure Out Who The Mom Was But...... Kai & Kiren.. Um Yeah Had Relations ( the sprites , i think that's what they were called , didn't have a gender per say they were just there so to speak ) So That's How Ren Was Born ! Sorry For The Whole ^ All Of That , I Just Wanted To Make Sure I Was Following Along Well . I Kinda Thought Ren Was Like Kagome's Brother Or Something But I Caught On :) Anywho Amazing Story It's Defintely Different But The Idea Is Great , & This Is Probably In My Top 5 Best SesshxKag Fanfics Already & It's Not Even Over Lol

 - Once Again I Apologize For My Slowness 

Have you stopped writing this? Are you going to ever finish it? O.O

I FOUND YOU!!!! Why hello again, I can't remember if I have reviewed or not.  But I have read this story since it's conception.  Beautifully written and I just have no idea what is going to happen.  On another note I hope you are OK and back from Iraq.

ja ne till next time keep up the good work and take your time

Your story is absolutely amazing with a very original plot. Yes, I've heard of child soldier stories, but nothing quite like yours. I do hope you would update soon :}.

I'm growing more and more fond of this story with every chapter! Your writing is improving with each installment, it had felt as though you were rushing it with the first chapters, but now that the timelines are caught up, it's a relief to see things progressing at a more natural state. Are you still in Iraq? If so, I wish you the best of luck! I can't wait for another chapter!

Post soon :)

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Q.oS

amazing....just amazing. that's the only word to describe this story. i love it! i love the take, the twists, it's all just so AMAZING! i saw you said you're in iraq, are you in the military?

Love the story! update soon!

It's easy to forget how young they are and how with even all that they have been through, there are still things that they don't know about. I can't wait to see what happens next and wonder if Kagome and Sesshouamru will ever actually meet :)

O_O OH!!!! you make the most interesting fiction!

Wow just found this story and it is sooooo good. Very unique and interesting. Well off to read more.

Loving this like crazy.

Good luck in Iraq. My husband always comes back nice and buff from there. Endless hrs at the gym trying to aleviate bordem. ;)

I'm still looking forward to the next chapter like crazy. :3  I hope you post it soon, because I just went through and reread this and it's freaking amazing.

I think this chapter is quite fascinating. I wonder what will result from Sesshoumaru and Kagome finally meeting (and then being taken over by the father tree). Will Sesshoumaru get away from them? What will Sesshoumar's father do now that he knows his son is alive? Will the bond between the two children continue to grow stronger? Aww... I can't wait to see what happens next :)

Another excellent chapter.  Things are finally coming together.  Glad they didn't blow you up with your lab.  Sending well wishes your way!

Just discovered this story and wow! I am really impressed. Very different from the usual stories on this site and a great read. 

I so love this fic! I want to hear the Father Tree's story!!!! Please update soon (no rush or anything).

I like the lore you've come up with to weave in elements of the Rumiko universe with your own. Really nice. Also the idea of Rin being a 'sprite' is cute. I like it.

Kagome and Sesshomaru finally made contact. how exciting. :)

I love rin! Cant wait for more.

keep up the good work.

okay so i've kinda been reading this again, skimming over to remember details. While we know a lot of the backgrounds on what's going on, we really dont know aobut the CORE itself, or WHY onigumo is being a military tyrant, surly, someone has got to know what's going on, and now that images of Sesshomaru a siver haired, golden eyed boy have been brought up, questions have got to be made. I guess I'm wondering WHY the CORE is doing all this, and who the CORE works for, or are they their own military thing... Why they are doing this confuses me.

O_O OMFG i LOVES this story!!!!!