Oh, no, Sango's meddling is going to break Kagome's heart for a second time!  I really love brokenhearted Kagome, betraying Sesshomaru stories.  I wonder just how bad he will be?  I enjoy finding out :)  Thanks for the quick update, I can't wait for Sesshomaru to step onstage.

Ohh me likee... :D and you left it on a cliffy! so I really hope you are planning to update soon.

For this to be your first fanfic its starting off really well.

Excellent Job! seperating the sentences the way you did made it easier to read. The chapter flowed nicely. Keep up the great work....I can't wait to see what happens next.

Good!  More, please?

Not a bad start at all. Maybe seperate your sentences for smaller paragraphs a little. I have to be reminded of that myself on my story as well. Anyway, keep going and above all else remember that this is your story and you are creating it the way you want it to be. Negative people will comment, but unless it is constructive criticism, ignore it and keep pushing. Good Luck!