Obviously, I'm late to the game of reading this fiction. I still appreciate the Gunslinger reference and totally agree with the emotions that it invokes.
From Stephen King's The Wizard in Glass. Susan Delgado and Roland Deschain.
I was loving this fic. Now I'm in love with the author.
That line made this chapter SO much more meaningful to me.
Thank you.
Cinno (Chapter 32) - Sat 25 Jan 2014
Amazing story please write more like this
that last line about the wife yoke. is OMQQQQQQQQ!!looveeit!
Aw, i loved this, sort of disappointing when things we like and love end.
swift death (Chapter 12) - Wed 27 Oct 2010
inuyasha is a JERK!
TruGemini (Chapter 32) - Mon 25 Oct 2010
Congratulations first off for completing your first beautiful story. from beginning to end you did not disappoint. I applaud you lady...Bravo!
dont finish it keep writing its so good
TruGemini (Chapter 31) - Mon 18 Oct 2010
Another wonderful chapter my dear. I lovehow theirrelationship was not forced quickly and how thay took their time and got to this point. A beautiful job on this entire story. Sorry to see it ending, but looking forward to your next creation.
Hey Lady!! Ok, chapter 23 was my last review. Been kinda busy on the home front trying to find a palce to move to. Anyway, I just caught up from 24 to now. I must say, this story is progressing extremely well. I had the utmost faith that you would keep the story at a good pace, and you of course have. You of course don't need to hear me tell you how great you're doing as your revviews all say so. Keep up the awesome job! I can't wait to see where this is heading next!
Patricia (Chapter 29) - Mon 11 Oct 2010
i was getting tierd of the fighting untill that cute ending made it all better!
CBC (Chapter 27) - Thu 30 Sep 2010
Wait what? So did they both fall asleep in the living room?
i loved this chapter and how they just reconnected..sesshomaru was kind of losing me when he was explainig what he meant by calling kagome ambiguous but i do understand and hope you update soon
Patricia (Chapter 26) - Mon 27 Sep 2010
fin as in this is how the story ends? or the chap is fin? cuz i really dont think that was much of an ending for the story.
I'm not a fan of when authors use a large chunk of their chapter content in a flashback, however you didn't simply regurgitate the content of another chapter, but rather gave this flashback its own flow. It also provided a chance to see things from sesshomaru's eyes, as before it was mostly Kagome centered. A nice start to the "healing" processes. I dont favor when in a story someone has been wronged, and then so suddenly forgives and then end of story. Its nice to see you still have some plans in store for them! :) keep it up!
omg i can not believe it i had missed two chapters i was busy moving my things but this story is turning out really really good i can not wait to see what happens with sesshomaru and kagome and i think inuyasha got what he justly deserved like in all seriousness how the hell he go try and spy around sesshomaru house and expect to not get caught like thats just when you want to smack him upside his head and just say 'you idgit' but i loved the two chapters i missed and hope you update soon
Oh Please (Chapter 24) - Fri 13 Aug 2010
Our version of that saying is "Coulda, Shoulda, Woulda...didn't."
Good chapter. Nice to see justice served.
Patricia (Chapter 23) - Sun 08 Aug 2010
i didnt care for the indiference sess showed kagome. but i loved how he used kags hair tie and was about to beat inu up! haha that end was bomb! cant wait for the fight.
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! SERIOUSLY!!! yOU START A FIGHT AND CUT US OFF BEFORE THE FIRST SWING? THAT IS SOOO NOT FAIR!!!
Ok, now that I'm back to normal and have calmed down some. I must say that Kagome being woman enough to explain herself, accept what she did wrong and apologize was excellent. To me, that is what a real woman would do in that situation. I believe you captured her perfectly on that one. You kept Sess reserved and somewhat stoic, which is how his character should be as that is how you portrayed him since the beginning. Keep up the great, awesome, beautiful job you are doing. I am very happy with your story and you definitely deserved every nomination you got.
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