Nice. I'm being oh, so very observant about Kagome's technique, so very bright to leave the review immediatelly and then, I get to the end of the chapter where you clearly state where you got your knowledge from... Taking about being hotheaded...
And you wrong about one thing. Taming a horse in only an hour IS possible.Usually, it indeed takes more time, but it IS possible. I managed in about 40mins... (Heh... Good, old times... Horses are the only things which I'm not being hotheaded with...)
Once again - great chapter! (Should I mention the suddenly and deliciously hot atmosphere at the end?)
Keep up, please, no matter how long it takes to update. I'm following you and I will till the end.
G (Chapter 11) - Sat 09 Oct 2010
Wow, what a great chapter! I was truly mesmerized by the scene of taming the horse! Tell me, did you read anythuing about horse's body language? Because, you see, what Kagome did is nothing short of a technique of the first, original "Horse Whisperer".This is the was the lead female horse in the wild living herd would have behaved to pacify (or, rather put in his place) the horse that broke the herd's rules, this is how Horse Whisperer also behaves. (I studied it some time ago and used this knowledge, it really works! I too used it in my fiction.)
jojo661538 (Chapter 11) - Sat 09 Oct 2010
wow another great chapter i love i mean absolutely love this story keep up the great work i hope you update soon ^_^
Momo (Chapter 11) - Sat 09 Oct 2010
Do not fret too much, I find this chapter went quite well and flow-y. Keep up the great work!
I am sorry the original was deleted! I know that can be devastating. *shudders at thought* Anyway, lovely chapter. I feel you explained Kagome's handling of the horse very well as I've seen it before on tv. Good stuff.
darke wulf (Chapter 11) - Fri 08 Oct 2010
Fabulous job! This story is an absolute treat! I can't wait to read more.
0o0o0o0o Such a lovely update!
Look marvelous, darling!! Glad to be of assistance. I know I've already read this, but I wanted to review anyway. :P
I really like the way the story is progressing thus far. Good character development and general flow. I'm really looking forward to the next installment. Hehehe... I get a sneak preview... and that excites me.
Ursh... now if only I could get inspired enough to sit my a$$ down and get the next chapter on Sangria done. Ugh! I'm a failure... *headdesk*
Much love! Can't wait for the next one!
Sena (Chapter 10) - Thu 30 Sep 2010
Oh my, I quite like this story! I have only begun reading it, I went through all 10 chapters at once! I am enjoying how much interaction Sesshomaru and Kagome are having in this story. Please keep writing it, this is a lovely story so far.
Vrey (Chapter 10) - Wed 29 Sep 2010
...i need more >_>
uwaaah! I only just started reading this (saw r0o's awesome pic and has to read) and I couldn't stop until last words.. You have just added yourself on my list of authors who keep me hanging on every word they write.
Can't wait this to continue. I love the way you make all characters and their behaviour have a place in this story as well as Kagome's knowledge.. love it love it love it!!!!
To first answer your questions, before I forget, this chapter did not feel rushed. Everything leading up to this point in terms of making the characters' thoughts and feelings known all coincide in a realistic progression. (And as this was your favorite to write, it was my favorite to read thus far!)
I did not want to leave a review after every single chapter since I went through all of them in one sitting this evening. I feel your story is incredibly written and the plot is rich. I love how the characters are portrayed with the perfect amount of insight into their thoughts and feelings. I am very glad to have found this story, though now that I have read what there is thus far, I am sad to admit I had it on the backburner as a future read for so long! I have not found any difficulites in the amount of dialogue because I feel that you write it when it fits.
In short, I have greatly enjoyed reading this and look forward to the next chapter. :)
Carla! (Chapter 10) - Tue 28 Sep 2010
I think it was wonderfully written and the conversation in this chapter was awesome! I will look forward to your next update! Good luck! =)
awesome job! Keep up the good work! Oh and congratulations!!!! I like to save reviews for the last chapter btw. Sorry I'm an annoying reviewer like that :P
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