i would like to try an air plane, i did once at the beach, there are a lots of places,like over the washing machine etc, so please use watever place you like but update very soon please.

OH MY JESUS!! This was SO good!! My whole body was tingling while reading this! I hope this evolves into just a story of them meeting at the bar and hooking up everytime. I think next time they should use handcuffs? Some sort of bondage but nothing extreme. Great one shot!

O_O i think i luffs you =x thats the smexy~ raRr

Very hot! I enjoyed it, but there were grammar erros- I caught about 6 "her"s in place of "him"s. You should think about getting a beta for the next 2 installments- not having to stop and think about who's doing what will only make the reading experience even better. As far as a kink to throw out there, I love a bit of bondage between these two. Something about Sess just makes me think he'd happily tie up Kags and keep her nice and close.

humm, this roo's worth..... i need a cold shower!.  awesome story can't wait till the next chapter.

A wonderfully hot and spicy romp you've written here. Sesshoumaru's demeanor is perfect, as is Kagome's personality.  There's a lot of sizzle and spark, as well as tension that makes for a great lemon.  The setting is also very conducive to creating the right mood for the scene.

*fans self* my dear Maddie, this was absolutely scorching hot!! I had an assignment to do as well but I couldn't resist clicking on your story and...boy, was I glad I did! The heavy sexual tension you've described in the earlier part of the story was so fitting, and I found myself feeling all jittery like Kagome was. Well done! I'd hate to go back to my international law assignment after reading something so much more exciting. Good job, keep it up!! You're doing great!!

H.O.T.

oh my god, that was awesome, i can't wait till next time so i hope is very soon.....bye.

Oh, that was good.  In fact, I'm still grinning.  Ok, kinks.....how about bondage?  Spanking?  Bondage and spanking?  Candlewax on skin.  role playing.  Geez, there is a whole world of possibilities.  Wonderful fic and I can't wait for more.

*blush* wow.this was amazing *fans self*. I would love to c the next installment ^^.