Madison!! Yet another blushingly-great chapter! But (yes, the dreaded ‘but’) as I was reading the part with the wax, I was wincing in pain. I’ve had the unpleasant experience of getting molten wax dripped unto my thigh – which hurt like a bitch – so I can only imagine how agonizing it could have felt like to have wax on your nipple! >.< Now, the writing was superb; don’t misunderstand me! ^__^;; To each her own…and Kagome… well… yeah. She likes the wax. :p My favorite line of chapter three was from Kagome: “You really gotta stop ripping my clothes.” Lawwwlzz!
Now, I don’t know if you already have something written up already or not, but I do have a suggestion… After another…intense bout of sex somewhere that’s not on a bed, Kagome could say to Sessxmonster: “Do you think we’ll ever have sex on our bed?” To which Sessxmonster might reply: “Maybe in a few years…We’ll see.” Or something to that extent… idk.. It was a passing thought. ^__^ Thanks for the chapter!
ducky out!
p0or soon to be wobbly kagome >:3 this is amusing and it was s0o0o0o very hot to! - r0o i cant wait for the last bit!
Aki (Chapter 3) - Thu 18 Mar 2010
bondage?
Threesome?
trisha (Chapter 3) - Thu 18 Mar 2010
You are already describing those things but maybe a bit more? thought about storm sex? i loved what you did to inuyasha, he must never, in his wildest dreams, have seen that 'cumming'! Tacky, i know, but you've got me squirming in my seat, n i have an entire night ahead of me:P Thank You for incorporating all those delicious, little tortures! And thank you for the amazing dreams i'm gonna have this night. i have an over active imagination, n u supply such lovely graphic fodder for it. can't wait to go to bed!!
trisha (Chapter 3) - Thu 18 Mar 2010
WOW.....perhaps you could describe the things being used more, like how the wax pulls her skin taut as it cools, or how the water runs down their bodies, how kagome feels while her blood flows down her skin(the feel of the blood flow), etc. Describe what and how the external stimulus feels, not just the sexual act, i feel that adds to the pleasure of the voyeur reader(us perverts).....keep up the hot work.
That is some goooood smut! I hope you update soon.
Sala (Chapter 3) - Sat 13 Mar 2010
That was pretty damn hot. *whew*
Tilayha (Chapter 3) - Sat 13 Mar 2010
Glass elevator anyone???? upscale resaurant bathroom or a walk in kitchen freezer......Kagome bare breasted against the cold wall.....
Tilayha
so where is the chocolate syrup? Doraphilia? I really have enjoyed the last three chapters and can't wait to read the final chapter.
did i already mention this story's awesome? if i haven't then i just said it now. it's so cute in a wierd way all the senerios you end up putting them through. will they ever make it onto a normal bed? oh well, i can wait until the next chapter, sort of. =]
It is now 9am at where I am. OMG. The pancakes are red, not simply because of strawberry jam. Gosh, even milk is turning pink.
Maddie, Maddie, Maddie. That was a glorious smut fest!!! I wish I could smut HALF as well as you did. Seriously. Anyway, Happy Birthday in advance! Stay pretty and sweet and talented as you are:)) 21 is not old in the least! This is coming from someone who's 2 months away from 23 XD
Anyway. Hmmm. *blushes* ...*coughs* In response to your author's note at the end of chapter three...I say...
Food. insertion. think marshmallows.
LOL we say smut muses are the worst but OMG you brilliant, brilliant darling, you do them so much justice I'd actually say smut muses are good when they attack Maddie!!!
"We can't do this here." "That's the point."
OMG. Like, word orgasm. totally. Can anything be sexier than your updates?? I doubt it. The thing is, I live halfway around the globe from you, so while you updated this at night, I'm reading it in the morning. LOL. Hot, unadulterated smut is not a good way to start a day HAHAHA. I think my pancakes are blushing. But anyway, fantastic work as usual dear!!
*blush* >.< Enough said.
But really, you’re a brill writer. I’m not going to say which parts specifically I liked the best because I’ll sound like a hentai… *shifty eyes* I will say this: thank you for writing! Five thumbs up! (if one has five thumbs…. o.O)
ducky out!
trisha (Chapter 2) - Tue 23 Feb 2010
Sorry, forgot to include these in my previous review! Perhaps he could bite her a bit, too, breaking skin, holding her in place as he dominates her and she squirms underneath him? A few spanks from his 'hot, large hands'?
trisha (Chapter 2) - Tue 23 Feb 2010
Hey, great writing!! I love smut with emotion and a bit of risk; you're dealing out healthy doses of both. THANK YOU for writing this! Perhaps they could make love in the rain or some other form of cold/hot water? Or maybe in an alley in the rain at night? And i'd like to read them having some fun on a nice comfy bed! Hope you're enjoying writing this as much as i'm enjoyin reading it.
ok, you got the idea how? it's a really good story though. not many people could pull something like this off. =]
Wow, these are really hot. I must say, I need a cold shower, even though I just came inside from shovelling snow. I think maybe next time they could explore the very fine razor edge of pain/pleasure. I personally know that it is a kink that many have. Great job! Encore, Encore!
O_O omg how =x raRr more!
Well that was hot again! *fan myself* Need a cold shower! lol
I was wondering, did you keep the link between sesshomaru and inuyasha? I mean, are they brothers? I'm trying to guess if maybe sesshomaru had already had his eyes on her before the bar and just then grab the opportunity that day.(since she knows inuyasha)... He seems to know a lot about her... Can't help the curiosity!
can't wait to see what you will think about next! ^^
maribel Mota (Chapter 2) - Mon 22 Feb 2010
oh oh oh oh my god, nina your sooooo bad, in al my life i never ever could image myself in this situation, at the park? no, never...... but you know next time make her a little more hard to get ok?.........we keep in touch throu the next chapter. bye,
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