Reviews for Primero by JeniNeji

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LuckZombie (Chapter 10) - Wed 14 Apr 2010

All i can say bout your story and the wonderful beta-editing is that the story is; SImply Beautiful!!!


SilentlyFuming (Chapter 10) - Wed 14 Apr 2010

eehhh?! Maybe?!  Nooo, you gotta continue it!  If not here, then a sequel!


Krazy (Chapter 10) - Mon 12 Apr 2010

So... you obviously continue it !!!! :D It's reaaaaaally good.


Ladyfairy (Chapter 10) - Sat 10 Apr 2010

wooooohhoooooo heck yes you should continue, your story is lovely and im always excited when i find out that you've updated..... so i vote continue :D


GreyEcho (Chapter 10) - Sat 10 Apr 2010

I liked to see thsis continued a bit more. :D I really love this story andlike it ths far. But Ii see some real possibilities for more chapters. So my vote is for the story to continue....please.


Snowfall (Chapter 10) - Sat 10 Apr 2010

Yes!  Please continue.  ^_^  When I first started reading, I wasn't sure that the story would hold my interest, but it has, and these last two chapters have hooked me.  ^_^


Izzy (Chapter 10) - Sat 10 Apr 2010

Aww and here i thought sesshy was really going to kill kagome. if you do choose to end it here it i cant complain. its cute and simple and leave a whole range of possibilities for a sequel (:


Avid Reader (Chapter 10) - Fri 09 Apr 2010

I believe you should continue this story, it's great! (I also want to find out what other effects his youki has on Kagome, if any.)


Rowdys girl (Chapter 10) - Fri 09 Apr 2010

If you feel this story has more to be told, then you should continue it. If you continue this story, I will read it and be happy. I do think it feels a little unfinished. We don't know if Inuyasha actually mates Kikyo and is happy, we don't really know why Sesshoumaru chose to mate her rather than kill her. We don't know if they can or want to deepen their bond. We don't know if they come to love each other...there's still a lot more to go. But you need to feel able to write it and keep up the quality of the writing.


Chi (Chapter 10) - Fri 09 Apr 2010

*fangirl squeel* that was so cute.i'm so glad that sesshomaru did as kagome requested.question for the author:will sesshomaru and kagoem grow to love eachother?i hope they do.plesae continue this story.i think its awesome


aiko (Chapter 10) - Fri 09 Apr 2010

oh, yes please.... i really want to read more. maybe a meeting with inuyasha?..... *puppy eyes*


Nilee1 (Chapter 10) - Fri 09 Apr 2010

Please continue. I can't wait for Inuyasha to realize that he doesn't have Kagome to kick around anymore. 


Indie (Chapter 10) - Fri 09 Apr 2010

Absolutely love this chapter. The interactions appear almost soft in nature. And you're right, it works as an ending, but I would love to see more.


Chi (Chapter 9) - Mon 29 Mar 2010

awesome new chappy.please continue


stars (Chapter 9) - Mon 29 Mar 2010

please updata


GreyEcho (Chapter 9) - Mon 29 Mar 2010

O_O I so need to read the next chapter...like now. *dies* Good chapter. I really can't wait to see what happens. Gah, No dying Kagome. *_*


sweetest angel (Chapter 9) - Mon 29 Mar 2010

noooooooo! don't stop now! please update soon! *whimper*


SilentlyFuming (Chapter 9) - Sun 28 Mar 2010

uh-oh, somebody's pissed...


Happy2SeeAll (Chapter 9) - Sun 28 Mar 2010

whoa!!!!! how did she disobey him? Now I am stuck going back and re-reading this story.... dont kill Kagome!


MissTeak (Chapter 9) - Sun 28 Mar 2010

Oh dear. Backfired. I was happy Kagome came to her senses and was bold enough to make a move, but Sesshoumaru is...well...being Sesshoumaru and making things difficult!!! :/ ...i'll hope for the best, and await the next update!


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