OMG! This was disturbibg. I honestly hope that Kagome wont forgive him that easily. Where the hell is her selfworth, spunk, indignation?
I wonder if a woman would have an orgasm in a situation like this. I dont think so, unless she likes to be watched.
You're writing style is very exciting. Amazing actually. I had to take a smoke after reading this chapter it got to me so bad.
I came upon your story a few days ago, I don't really even remember why or how. But here I am, stunned to silence and in eager anticipation for whatever you have to throw our way next. I love the imagry, the plot, the twists and turns. Your story is so well done, I could imagine it as if I was reading a comic book/graphic novel. I must say, my dear, that I am thoroughly impressed and I eagerly and excitedly await the new chapter to come.
Your Fan,
Inumaru_Rapture
Hmmm, maybe it is just me, but it seems as if Sesshoumaru has been doing whatever he pleases and expecting Kagome to just deal with his *instincts*. I understand that she loves him and is trying to see things from his POV, but he needs to understand that she is human and things that don't bother him mean a great deal to her! She will always look back on her mating day and feel some shame! I think Sess has some major making up to do!
Please don't make us wait long to know what is going to happen next!!!
jojo661538 (Chapter 38) - Wed 10 Feb 2010
this is one of the great stories i have read so far keep up the great work ^_^
Kat (Chapter 38) - Tue 09 Feb 2010
The fit is about to hit the shan.... omg that chapter was great! I can't wait to see what happens next... especially with sango and her lovely love triangle and then there is kags and sesho that ought to be the discussion of a lifetime! update soon please (like before next week pretty please with naked sessho on top?)
I see where it's going. Kagome is already making excuses for him. I'm sorry but I don't like that he's going to get away with just a 'slap on the wrist' if even that. To me he degraded her by his actions. Just as a previous reviewer stated, she has given in to his side of things and tried to understand him more than he has her. I just don't think he should get away with this. His uncle may punish him after receiving the letter but for me that's not where the punishment should come from. I'm also still mad at his brothers for witnessing it. At least Inuyasha gave Koga a good thrashing. Come on Kagome, don't be a wimp by letting him off the hook. I guess I'm just made of tougher stuff because life made me that way and I have a few grey hairs to prove it. haha.
I wonder if one of Sango's injuries is internal where she is unaware of. If she miscarries, she for sure will never forgive Miroku. Unless she's like Kagome and let's him get by with a mere 'slap on the wrist'.
yay for updates!!! awesome job and i really hope Kagome gets a chance to get some payback on Sesshy, even if they are in love he deserves a good slap to the face or something like that. Anywho can't wait to see what happens next!!
I love you, love you, love you! Hee Hee Hee! You know that I'm reading in bed tonite! Thank you so much!
well I managed to finish it all and hope you'll update soon. I almost died at the Loki part... it was so fitting lol. But the last chappie threw me for a loop and i couldn't help but feel sorry for Kagome >.< I really hope things get better so hurry up and update! LOL
Ohhhhhhh *facepalm* Loki..... Why didn't I see it sooner. It all makes sense now. *feels a bit slow*
*giggle* I forgot about the god Loki.
Great chapter!
omg Sidhe! I listened to Wicked and started reading this and I'm not done yet but dangit I stayed up way to late and now I'm going to be tired for work tomorrow! >.< This is an awesome story and I can't wait to read the rest of!!! You rock!!
Bell (Chapter 37) - Wed 03 Feb 2010
OMG! I'm so upset by the way that he took her! I hope that they will be able to make up soon! Great Job as always! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Animal instincts or not, Sesshoumaru should suffer for what he did to Kagome. That was absolutely horrible and beyond humiliating. His brothers should not be let off the hook, either. Koga will be punished by Inuyasha. Kagome better not give in and forgive Sesshoumaru too easily by trying to use the excuse of his animal side to convince herself. If that had been me, I would not want to be touched by him or look at him or his brothers and would need some time away from them to come to terms with such a traumatic incident. He himself admitted in his thoughts that there had been other actions he could have taken. I just don't want him to get off with a 'slap on the wrist'.
Kat (Chapter 37) - Tue 02 Feb 2010
I thought you said you were done with the cliffhangers!!!! update soon please (like really soon)
Oh man, what a way to experience your mating. Something that is supposed to be so special, laid bare before everyone...I don't know who I feel worse for, Kagome or Sesshoumaru. Too bad Kagome didn't let Sess just kill Koga. It would have served him right for being such a little pest!
Please hurry and update, I need to know if Sess and Kagome will still be ok!!!
Indigo_Miko (Chapter 37) - Tue 02 Feb 2010
Poor Kagome. I hope Inuyasha beats Koga's ass...but doesn't kill him. That would just negate Kagome's situation. I can get the whole Sesshomaru's instincts thing, but I still hope he has to suck up to Kagome for awhile. How humiliating. I don't know how she will be able to look Thor and Freyr in the eye anytime soon. It seemed to me that during the earlier part of this story Kagome was giving a lot of concessions towards Sesshomaru's instincts. I hope that now that the oppurtunity presents itself Sesshomaru will learn to deal with Kagome's humanity. It's been mentioned in a passing way about Sesshomaru's brothers teaching him a bit about humans but I am looking forward to seeing how he deals with this situation with Kagome.
I can not Belive you did that!! I wanted them to mate but not like that!!!! You have to fix it NOW!!!
Awesome story BTW. Love IT!
Meiki (Chapter 37) - Mon 01 Feb 2010
Fantastic new chapter!! It's nice to see a new side to the relationships in this story and you continue to write so beautifully. Cheers!
(and thank you for the sidenote. It made me feel all toasty!)
Oh WOW. Wonderful update. Such a shame about how things came about for Sessh and Kagome. I hope Yasha beats the tar out of Koga. Nice to see the half-brothers agree on something.
Beautiful work on this story. I look forward to the next update!
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Yep! It's still there - the picture that I can't get out of my head
Miroku actually turned his head away while EVERYBODY ELSE is WATCHING!!!!!
I guess it's better than Koga blood all over the place...but, GEE! Poor Kagome!!! And Sesshoumaru/Loki!
Sidhe - you're killin' me!
PS: I look forward to Inuyasha giving Koga the beating he so dearly deserves!!!!
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