hatchi? or Itachi? as in the ninja older brother of sasuke from Naruto? otherwise interesting :3

What a fun story!  Your characters are very vividly drawn.  I love your Touran, and her cousin is interesting too.  I can't wait to see what the old woman at the market noticed about Kagome.  Please, hurry with more!

ummm.... you have it a bit of editting to do.

okay i really like this but there seems to be som inconsistancy. mostly we go from a trusting kagome who just left with Toran, to a Kagome that's a slight 'racist.' thinking that Sesshomaru is a monster when she knows fully well that he's the western lord. and he cant and isn't all sunshine and roses.

Then you have Shippo knowing whats going on, then not, i dunno maybe he's just acting but yeah... its a bit off.

and Inuyasha. i can understand he shows his love by being an arsehat but he seems to be going a big far?

I dunno i'd love tos ee more and i like the story I'd like to see more Sesshomaru though.

i really enjoy this story i wish you'd update more often 

;_; I can't believe Inuyasah threw Shippou into a tree. Poor Shippou. I like your fic and can't wait to read the next chapter.

it's a really interesting begining! I can't wait for the next chapter!

will we see sesshomaru again soon? he seemed to have something in mind other than the jewel shards when he told the cat to keep kagome safe...can't wait to see what it was!!

Hope you will be able to update really really soon, please!!!!

Oh and happy new year! ^^

Exactly who do you plan on killing? This is much different than any other I have read.  I look forward to the next chapters and hope it isn't someone I love that you will be killing :(