Hello
I'm confused, i thought the were in a great rush to save a forbidden child before it was born and time was scarce. Now they have taken a month off too train.is the baby born or still coming and time wasn't so scarce, please clarify as the story is good but now feels like it is going in another direction and that what was the original driving force is being ignored.
Lulu (Chapter 7) - Wed 27 Mar 2019
Story is really good looking forward to update
What a great update!
Please continue!!!!
Please finish story.
Rin (Chapter 6) - Sun 17 Sep 2017
This is a really good story please update more
The first chapter was great! Had me hooked by the end of it. Love this whole story so far! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
more please?
Interesting so Kagome is a Shikon No Tama on her own then LOL no wonder when she is emotional her powers are so great. Looking forward to more.
I like Kariudo but the way Kagome was reacting to him I wonder if he has super pheramones or something. lol Looking forward to more
Zeelian (Chapter 2) - Tue 07 Mar 2017
Yu Yu Hakusho crossover?
I am really enjoying this so far. I am looking forward to reading the rest you have written so far but that will have to wait until tomorrow.
um in chapter 1 Kagome talks to shippo and tells him what is going on. then in chapter 2 she seems to have forgotten talking to shippo seems like a continuity error to me
Keep posting!
melissa (Chapter 5) - Fri 20 Jun 2014
I love this story. This is like the 100th time I have read it. Please update soon. I also love Crystal Hearts and am waiting on that one to update soon too.
please update soon please
Ameakis (Chapter 1) - Wed 15 Dec 2010
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!! BUT ITS BEEN SOOOOO LONG SINCE YOU ADD ANY MORE CHAPTER. Please update soon, I love Crystal Hearts but I still wish to read more of this one too.
Please update this story. I really want to know what happens next. I absolutely love it. Sesshoumaru here is so awesome with his secretive protective side that leaves me dieing of curiosity. I love it. Toran, the ice panther lady, is awesome too. Just one question though, is Hiei the child? Because in Yu YU Hakusho the same thing happens to him except that no one is there to protect him. I still love it though! But just to let you know, if you do know who Hiei is can you have him be the kid and have Kagome be his adopted mom like she is for Shippo? Anyway its just a thought. I love your style of writing. Everything goes smoothly and Kagome is just plain awesome. Thank you.
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