lmao =x mr. meaty seriously too cute! actually i love this fic, I'm betting inupapa will just be chuckles about it, as for everything else *totally amused*

You are evil , twisted and evil . I never cringed away from a screen as much as I have with this story I feel a little shooken up from the mental images displayed to me inside my head . Nice , very gruesome and gory and wonderful , I humbly await the next chapter .

Love this chapter! Update quickly!!!! I want to see Kagome and Papa Naraku again!

What Naraku and the Hyo no have done to Sonemi is absolutely sick, twisted, demented...and fitting. I wonder if she'll be able to kill herself after this. Nah, hopefully not. That's what she gets for trying to do some of the most unthinkable things to Kagome just because she couldn't get custody of Kikyo. Will we see more of Sonemi though she's being thoroughly raped and tortured? That's definitely enough for one to lose their mind. I love it! Can't wait for the next chapter.

Please update!! I am in love with this story!!!

SQUIDLING!  That is so funny.

Naraku's nasty little Santa's Helpers are unspeakably perverse and disgusting.  If Kagome's mother was not so full of herself and willing to do bad things to Kagome, I'd almost feel sorry for her.  Great writing!

Is Naraku planning for Kagome to be his bride when she gets older?  DON'T TELL ME, I'm merely speculating...

This had left me utterly speechless. This is dark yet has sweetness that one Kagome can add. I love the unique twist with Naraku being evil but not to Kagome. It remends me of a mafia boss with his children or in this case, child. Even though, it's dark and full of torture this story has touched my heart in all honesty. I can not wait for more. The love between Naraku and Kagome is so beautiful and innocent. Nothing is more beautiful than a daughter's love for her "Papa Naraku". Plus I can't wait to see the dogs reaction to Kagome's story. And we thought Naraku would be a force to reckon with. Papa Inu isn't legendary for nothign!! I can't wait for when Sessho and Kago start dating. Naraku will be all " I told you to bring her home at ten." Tenticle shoots at Sesshomaru. He dodges and growls at Naraku. Poor Kagome throws a hissy fit while yelling at Naraku "Papa, you promised!! You did it again!!" LOL, I really love this story and can not wait for more from you.

Okay, are you CERTAIN the sun rises in the West if you are in China or Japan?  I am a very curious person, and you really piqued my curiousity with that statement.  I've tried and tried to figure it out using logic, and can't come up with a logical explanation for such a thing.  I even drew diagrams.  I would ask my sister-in-law, who comes from Japan, but her English is definitely not up to the challenge...  And my brother, who has visited there many times, is too dull to make note of things like that. 

Now we know more about the origins of Mr. Meaty, and how Kagome met Sesshomaru and his father.  This story is a real treat, you are making my day here!

Sesshomaru is Pretty Puppy!  When I was very small, like three or four, I was left to run loose outside alone most of the time, and I used to play with a stray dog I called Pretty Puppy!  Great Very Young Child name for a dog, btw...  I wonder if there is a back story to her stuffed dog being named "Meaty" though.  Meaty.  HaHa. 

Awesome story!  You have a creative mind and a flair for colorful, dramatic writing.  A few very minor spelling or typing errors, but definitely not enough to detract from the reading experience.  Keep up the amazing work!

Chilling portrayal of how a mother can hate her own child.  Not too far over the top, either.  Good thing Kagome has powerful people who love her.  Most children in this situation don't have anyone on their side...

I loved the torture scene.  Now that sounds peculiar, doesn't it?  It is so ingenious and detailed, I would really hate to have you torture me, Handcuff!  And the scene reflects the predilictions and characters of the participants, as portrayed in the anime and manga, so well and so daringly!  Usually, when Naraku, Bankotsu, and Jakotsu are used in an A/U fic, they are made 100% nicey-nicey.  You've done an amazing job in bringing out their "good" sides, while maintaining the luscious extravagance of their "bad" sides.  They are so devoted and loving to little Kagome, yet still wonderfully violent and sadistic. 

What interesting dynamics you have created!  The characterization of Kagome's mother (who, seriously, is NOT named Kun-Loon in the anime or manga), is so creative and unique, and the way you have re-worked Naraku is brilliant.  I am SO looking forward to reading more of this story!

Please continue and update fater. I love this story, especially since Naraku still has his evil side but also has his adoring and lovable father side. I love that. I love how you portray Naraku here. Your interpretation of Kagome as a child is the same as mine and I'm glad that you put Jakutso and Bankotsu here too, i love these two so much. A tiny suggestion- please see if you can hook up Jak and NAraku together, cause Nara-kun is such a cute pet name for Naraku and I can't see anyone but Jak saying it. Please continue. Your an awesome writer and I love this story.

I love Naraku and Kagome's relationship its so fresh and so cute :) I waited for soooo long and now the stopries updated I can't wait for the next chapter ! I faithfully await it :D

You are so creative with this. I myself cringed so many times through out the chapters. No amount of saw films can compare to this. Wow, genius. Can't wait for the next update!

All i can say is holy shit got damn i never thought i would enjoy reading about someone getting tortured but that last chapter had me feeling like a villian mwahahahahahah!!!!! (evil villian laugh) all n all great read