NOT nice to just stop there when I'm on the edge of my seat. I left this story for a year or two and come back only to have my mind blown once more with how awesome it continues to be! I still love it to this day and can't wait for you to update! Please try and consider updating sometime soon, I really would love to see what happens next and 21 chapters just isn't satiating my growing appetite for this story! I love the care and detail you put into the story :) hope this gives you some encouragement! All in all, I LOVE THIS!
tify (Chapter 21) - Mon 25 Feb 2013
pleaaassseee updaatteee i loveee your storrryyyyy
mary (Chapter 21) - Tue 05 Feb 2013
nice story!! please continue this story, I really want to know what will happen next, specially about the war, and it was really nice to read a fic where naraku is not the villain, hehe
Nyuka (Chapter 21) - Wed 11 Jul 2012
What a great story ^-^
I love the care you take in detailing uncomfortable situations...like the torture and the fight scenes. Not to bash other authors but it is something many tend to skim over. It is difficult to detail such things I suppose, so I commend you for having the stomach and skills to do so. ^-^
Question, is the time skip going to happen some time after the meeting with Kagome's father or after they catch the "Master"? Since they already have a lead as to his location, It would leave room for the story to change directions after a time skip. It could progress with a new "Master" or maybe the original "Master" after laying low for some years. I can only theorize where you will take this story as I am a simple reader. I would like to say that I look forward to future posts and thankyou for what you have writen. ^-^
Nyuka
Fluffy (Chapter 21) - Thu 24 May 2012
love it! cant wait for an update :D
Thankyou thank you thank you for updating. you made my night =D
And the Humanitarian award gose to.....
wow that was so amazingly horrific!
I'm a girl and my penis hurts sooooo bad right now, i love it, and i love the bugs, its a nice touch!
great chapter. I can't wait to see what else happens.
Mandy (Chapter 17) - Sat 20 Aug 2011
keep up the ghood work on your story i keep reading it over and over again
Sunset Senshi (Chapter 17) - Tue 16 Aug 2011
You never fail to bring an amazing chapter. I love the story and I am HOOKED. Like it's my drug in all honesty and I just have to have more. Until next time! LOVE THE STORY!
o.o they have kagome upstairs hahaha they cant be THAT mad! this was an awesome chapter. though contructively, there was a bit of confusing. In your new footage segment, you had naraku's thougts. Seriously unless they got some SERIOUSLY awesome camera,s i dont think they'd be able to hear his thoughts.
Wow, that was way more intense than the previous chapter to me. I think you cut and copied a little too much from the last chapter because you got some of Naraku's thoughts in there when it was just supposed to be footage but otherwise it was awesome. can't wait to see what you do next.
Interesting, I liked this chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next, wonder how Sesshomaru will react.
Intense is an understatement. Awesome chapter.
Thanks for writing!
Sunset Senshi (Chapter 16) - Sun 24 Jul 2011
You're just a pure genius. i love your work. Just really mind blowing the different twists and than turns and than back on a straight path you put us readers through. You keep our attentions and just the story is wonderful. I can't wait for the upcoming chapter.
melissa (Chapter 15) - Wed 08 Jun 2011
I have fallen in love with this story.
I can not tell you enough that I wait every day for new chapters.
Please up date A.S.A.P.
I just might die if you stop.
Sunset Senshi (Chapter 15) - Sat 07 May 2011
Still continues to be an amazing story filled with suspense, action, drama and etc. I love it! Can't wait for the next update. YOu are an amazing author with a very creative mind.
So Naraku’s plan was to let everyone think that she was dead so she can grow up in peace and then sneak attack them huh. Good plan, gives her time to grow up, train, maybe fool around with Sesshomaru when she’s old enough, hehe, but that’s just me. Great chapter, can’t wait to see what happens next.
I have loved this story from start to finish. OMG!! I'm so excited as to what happens next. From what I've read so far, I have the feeling that Sonemi is going to be used as a breeder for the Hyo no now that she's pregnant. Talk about adding insult to injury for her. She's going to be floored when she learns that she's pregnant and can't do a damn thing about it. HA HA!! I definitely want to know who this 'Master' is and when he'll make an appearance in this. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
i so love this story!
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