Oh i forgot to say i loved the little scene between Naraku and Kagome at the end of the chapter :D
hahaha i loved it yet again :D not to put a damper on my review, but this sentence has a misplaced modifier. You be good for your uncles and Aunt Kagome thats how u have it written; it should be written like this, You be a good for your uncles and aunt, Kagome. Unless you are saying that Kagome has an aunt named Kagome... sowwie >< I just noticed that >:3 but it doesnt matter i still adore your story and i cant wait for ur nxt chapter!
Jess (Chapter 3) - Sun 03 Jan 2010
Great Chapter :)
Mimiru (Chapter 2) - Fri 01 Jan 2010
Idk about anyone else. But I for one LOVE how Naraku is portrayed, its definately something different then what we are used to seeing him as.
Now I'm somewhat inspired to write him as 'kind' and not evil for once lol
Jess (Chapter 2) - Fri 01 Jan 2010
This is a very good story so far and very well written :) I feel really bad for Kagome tho :( I can't believe her mom is sooooo nuts :(
Random Kitten (Chapter 2) - Fri 01 Jan 2010
YAY! Second chapter! I'm really enjoying your story; I can't wait for the next chapter. :3
Kristin (Chapter 1) - Thu 31 Dec 2009
well, of course Kags mom is a bee, Im tryig to figure out if Naraku is bein kind or not. I like it thoughm update soon,
RandomKitty (Chapter 1) - Thu 31 Dec 2009
Well I love it so far :) cant wait for the nxt chapter :D happy new years all :D:D:D
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