Even though Kagome doesn't agree with her son's desire to be wild, she respects it...
Wow! This is one blockbuster first chapter! It has everything: it is touching, exciting, and suspenseful. Poor Kagome, will she be separated from her son for 500 years? I can't wait to find out...
Ash (Chapter 2) - Thu 05 Nov 2009
This is very interesting! And that scene with Sess and Kagome was exactly how I pictured they both would react! Good job! Oh and btw, how old is Kagome exactly? Just out of curiosity. :)
autumngold (Chapter 2) - Thu 05 Nov 2009
Thank you for allowing Kagome to make it back to Kyo. I like that she loves her son enough to realize that he needs Sesshoumaru. Even if Kagome really doesn't care for him, she will try to be around him for her baby. Thanks for the update!
i really like the interplay between sesshoumaru and kyo. there's no real hero worship, and sesshoumaru doesn't look after him because he loves him. there's a separation, perhaps a bit of admiration, but it's not all sunshine and daisies. fantastic.
stars (Chapter 2) - Thu 05 Nov 2009
please updata
Oh wow. Your serious works have scared me ever since 'Atonement.' I cried for ages after reading the last chapter. This has a really good start, and you've already reeled me in, all I can say is, be kind. And don't make me cry like you did in 'FIREMENS!' after Inupapa died. And let me point out that we wouldn't be having this talk if you weren't such a good storyteller!
Jane
autumngold (Chapter 1) - Thu 05 Nov 2009
Poor Kagome. I just hope that Sesshoumaru will protect her son. I also hope that she will be able to go back for him. Please update again soon.
Jupe (Chapter 1) - Wed 04 Nov 2009
Ack! I should be upset that you're starting up yet another story when Incarnate isn't over yet, but you paint such vivid pictures that I can't help but hope for more... of anything really. But especially this. It seems so ominous, and I know you can do this bunny justice. Can't wait to see where you take it!
...but please update Incarnate some time? ;^;
Wow. I really like where you're going with this. You've got the characters down very well and I'm interested in the next part of the story. Kagome can't get back to Kyo and now Sesshoumaru is stuck taking care of his nephew. And the part about Onigumo's cave is giving me a really bad vibe. Is Naraku responsible for InuYasha going crazy?! Do more bad guys lurk around the corner?! Is Naraku coming back to smite evil upon Feudal Japan?!
You can tell I really want to keep reading this story. Update soon! Definitely a new favorite of mine.
-CA
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