Sesshomaru is such a frickin' ass! God damn it all! We knew he was a stubborn, emotionally constipated biggot, but still! You would think that with all the shit they've gone through he would have said something remotely similar to "I love you, Kagome" by now! Gah, that just pisses me off. And what's worse, he misses his own son's birth! Come on! Complete and utter bull shit! He could have been there! Hell, my dad was there for my birth and he wasn't expecting me for another three months! And he was out at sea at the time! So, yes, go Kagome! Bring out the bitchiness and whoop his sorry ass into submission! XD
:) I can be a sadist sometimes. ^_^ I love you Sess, please don't kill me!
So, now that my ranting for Sesshomaru has been laid out, all that's left to say is: I LOVE THIS STORY!
It just pulled me in. At first, I thought: 'Oh no, another one of those, he's going to use her for something and she's going to try and use him from this marriage, but of course she will fall head over heels in love...blah...blah...blah.'
But anyway, I'm glad a gave this a shot. Not only where the lemons very well written, they showed the love and tension between the two in other than a sexual sense.
What did weird me out through was Sesshomaru's mother (step-mother? Did she give birth to him or to just InuYasha?) has my name: Jocelyn. Hell, it's even spelled exactly the same. So yea, aside from Cassandra Claire's Series and this story, I have never seen my name anywhere in print (that is if you don't count my school newspaper or that one time that on the local news...).
Yet this is all beside the point. Frankly, I love this, and I can't wait to see more. I just hope that things get resolved before either (or both) does something they will regret.
And I'd love to see more of Toga (Sessy's grandfather). I think he might be able to kick Sesshomaru's ass into gear....though for some reason, I don't like his father, Lain. I get the feeling that Lain is missing out on a very crucial piece of Sesshomaru's character, and is in essense, aiding in Kagome and Sesshomaru's emotional stuggles as a couple. Though I could be wrong, but it does feel that way, at least to me.
So, yes, I'll just cut my blathering here with a final adieu and a wish for a quick update. :)
--Gothic Lust
I love Fan hitting shit! I can't wait for it to happen. I have been on pins and needles waiting for th next installment. please try not to be so long next time. lots of love and keep it up!
wickedone43 (Chapter 24) - Sun 06 Jun 2010
Looking forward to the next Chapter. I am just glad you are continuing this fic. Great job so far and hell yeah...loooking forward to the s#$%^ hitting the fan! Bring it on!!!
REDWOLF (Chapter 24) - Sat 05 Jun 2010
Fantastic story! ALRIGHT!! I love it when the "shit hits the fan"! It's about time Kagome stood up for herself and straighten Seshoumaru's ass out! I think thats what you are planning, but, no matter, what ever you right it is ALWAYS good.
Mia (Chapter 23) - Sun 16 May 2010
Awwww!!! T^T
I wanna cry!!!! I wanted to cry ever since Chapter 20 where Kagome first starts doubting (T^T) and Sesshoumaru's decision in the beginning of Chapter 21 to not tell her that he loved her (T^T).
This BETTER have a happy ending..
I hope you update soon!
ceres (Chapter 23) - Mon 19 Apr 2010
It´s a wonder that she still wants to stay with him. She is only human and honestly, if I had a male like him I couldn´t stand it. His cowardice will cost him everything, maybe then he will grow up.
AGH!!!!! I don't get it! Why is he being a stubborn JACK-ASS! *Grabs hair in frustration* He's already married to her! What is wrong with telling her he loves her when she is already so obviously in love with him? He's acting like its some crime to love your wife. I want to kill him.
You have done well with his character because I truly HATE him right now. My heart relates to Kagome. Her emotional situation and mine are similar so maybe my own hate is also transfered to Sesshoumaru here as well. But either way if he were real I'd throw him in a wood chipper!
*Deep breath* I love the fan fic tho and can't wait for the next chapter. Please update again soon. Lot of love!
bre (Chapter 23) - Sat 17 Apr 2010
Sesshomaru is a dumba**. Otherwise i like the story.
I really do not like Sesshoumaru. Now, don't get me wrong, I love the character portrayal - very well done. I just don't like his selfishness. I'd slap him if I could....darn selfish, pigheaded bas***d.
Great story. Keep up the fabulous work!
I say this now....Sesshomaru is a fool of a man if there was one....
Great story...please keep updating.
REDWOLF (Chapter 23) - Sat 17 Apr 2010
Ok, I have decided....Sesshoumaru is a sicko and Kagome is even sicker! Why don't she just start using him for everything he's worth because clearly he's a nut and is always gonna be a Daddy's boy. Great chapter, I so enjoy when a story actually gets a reaction out of me!
I wonder what happened in his past to make him so scared to love someone. If he doen't wise up and soon, he'll end up losing her and his son along with his respect by those around him. He'll end up completely alone because I have a feeling that even his family won't want him around. He's already got a good start in that direction by him avoiding being there to witness his son's birth.
That was the most powerful thing I've read in a long time. Wow.
I love your works, and I see Sesshoumaru getting himself into worlds of trouble here soon. Tch tch, better be there for her Sesshoumaru else you in troubles. By the way the title of your story always puts 'Whatta Man' by Salt N' Peppa ft. En Vouge in my head. Lolz
This chapter made me feel like I was gonna start crying. Oh mand Sess needs a kick in the a double s....He shouldn't do that to the woman he loves or heck even just likes no matter how afraid he is of losing control.
Great story...keep going with it please.
Poor little fool. I see Sess losing his family in the very near future.
REDWOLF (Chapter 21) - Mon 12 Apr 2010
Kagome needs to put the scare into Sesshoumaru...she needs to take her child and brother and leave his a$$ until he see the light, the jerk!
Page 4 of 5
| | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | |