This is awesome! I can't get enough of this fic! Please tell me you will update soon? It is just truly awesome!!! Great job my dear!
I still love how you portray Kagome. How she handled Sesshoumaru was exactly what I would have expected from her. She treated his injuries but that doesn´t meand she´s ready to forgive and forget. She really needs time. I hope she won´t cut the children off from Sesshoumaru, he needs them and the children will need their father, too. Male influence is important to children so I hope she will let him see the children as often as possible. That doesn´t mean that she has to forgive him now.
She needs to heal first and that doesn´t work in such a short time but Sesshoumaru need a reality check, means that he has to mature. After that I can see them trying again, they do love each other after all. I´m so glad that you´re not rushing anything or that the other woman won´t get pregnant from him. I´ve always hated such kind of drama and it felt like some teenager wrote the story. Yours is so much more realistic than other fanfics and I like the maturity in it. Many Authors just won´t let Kagome mature even when they make her some twenty-year old or more, she acts as if she´s still fifteen in their story which aggravates me to no end.
It is great to see this story updated once again. I honestly understand about life throwing temper tantrums.
Great update - glad to see that Kagome has some backbone and won't deal with Sesshoumaru until she is ready. Great writing - pulled on my heartstrings! I was actually feeling bad for Sess!
zero1101 (Chapter 27) - Tue 17 Aug 2010
I believe it's time for her to forgive, people make mistakes and it's those mistakes that people finally see the picture. Both need to sit down with a therapist and talk about everything, she may have been hurt. But she is not a child anymore and keeping his kids away from him is bad, she is hurting them AND him AND herself. She now brought people in her life problems and didn't want them in it but she did, if she never gets past this the kids will grow up and suffer from not having a dad in their life. What I'm saying is based on truth, I went through this b/c my dad cheated on my mom out of a drunken state. I was never allowed to see him b/c my mom said I couldn't and now I have no father b/c he killed himself. I blame my mom for it, and we fight all the time now. Hopefully for Kagome and the boys sake, Sess doesn't do that and she finally see's the light.
Mia (Chapter 27) - Tue 17 Aug 2010
Damn Kagome! You shoulda let him in, let him see the boys, then KICKED HIS ASS OUT! NOT FIX UP HIS FACE! NOT SOFTLY TELL HIM TO GO! GOD! YOU'RE TOO FREAKIN' NICE!!!
Besides that, this was great chapter! I am glad that Sesshoumaru got socked a few times by people who care. I know he is honestly regretting cheating but that's not all he should be remoresful about. He NEVER, not ONCE, told Kagome that he loved her.
Kagome's behavior was admirable (saying that others shouldn't deal with her problems) but then she shoulda punched him.
Update Soon!
(This was kind of a crack review. I hope you don't get too freaked out by it! ^^")
I'm glad you found time to update! This is one of my favorite stories, and I look forward to each new chapter.
tiana (Chapter 27) - Tue 17 Aug 2010
i rlly enjoyed thiz even though itz sad keep writing
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