| I love your explanation of how this Sesshy found Rin. Sweet! And the "misunderstanding" wasn't overdone. As for the ending, Sess is such a guy! Keep up the great work, I love it!
you gave them troubles!! noooooooooooo. hwo are they supposed to have hot monkey sex when they're not together.
| Holy guacamole...I've seen this story kickin' around on the homepage, but now I finally got a chance to sit down and read it. This is some pretty hot stuff, and I like the whole 'men in uniform' thing. One of my history teachers in high school - her husband was a fire fighter, even one of those ones that made it into the calendar. If you are short on ideas, you may want to incorporate the Fireman's Calendar most stations do to raise money for the fire house. Just a suggestion. I plan to continue to read this...steamy little adventure. Whew. You got my attention! Great job, to you and the myserious co-author.
Oh, I don't know, you seemed to handle it pretty good. You've got him bouncing back and forth between hero and sex-crazed ass like a pro! I'm still laughing over the end.
Indeed it is hard to top naked FIREMENS!!! and sex... but I did indeed enjoy that. Ahhhh, half-naked Touga *drools*. does please me.
FIREMENS!!!!!!!
Bravo and more please! :D
oh yummy, half-nekkid Touga. almost as good as a shower full of nekkid FIREMENS!
| This is great!!!!! Totally lovin it. Heheh I feel like such a perv reading this though.... Anyways KEEP UPDATING!
HAHAH. Sesshoumaru's last line made me laugh out loud. One part that doesn't sound right is when he says "Father keeps telling me I should marry and adopt her." It makes it sound like he should marry Rin, lol. Maybe he should say "Father keeps telling me I should get married and then adopt her."? or something like that.
:3 raRr half nudie soapy papa! that was cute ^_^
HAWT stuff Miss K! You're visuals are very distracting dammit! LOL
(Chapter 1) - Sun 27 Sep 2009
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| Reading the beginning of the chapter, I was going to compliment the author on the wonderful, evocative, imagery. Then I got to the shower scene. Well, that knocks every other shower scene I've read right out of the water. Whoah.
| HaHa. My brother is a volunteer fireman, and that beeper thing can be funnier than heck.
| I also like the title. It is SO direct and to the point.
| Wow, our Sess is one hot, cheeky fireman! Is he quick with the lines, or what? Kagome's gonna think he's a slut. And I love the part about Kikyo, the firedog. She is one viscious bitch! I hope InuYasha doesn't have too close of a personal relationship with her... As always, I love your work. You are so witty, yet at the same so good at writing things with great emotional depth. What a rare and wonderful combination...
jgem (Chapter 3) - Sat 26 Sep 2009
| Oh, Wow! Um....yeah. Wow! That was...um...can't think of anything but a very HOT fireman right now. Excuse me, while I go back and reread that chapter again.
| Wow. My inner voyeur that I keep locked up really liked that. :3 It's like that chapter came right out of my own fantasies. Haha =x
| SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE HAWT FIREMENS SHOWER STUFF!!! >:3 mew~! this made me laugh my butt off: "[i]"I-I'm sorry," she stuttered, "I needed to talk to you and I guess your father... he said you were in the shower and I thought he meant there was only one shower. There isn't only one. There are many of you. So many of you... And I-I didn't know that and now I know, which would have been good to know before I came in. Well, might have been good. It's kind of late for that now. So, I'm just going to go and-and Inuyasha there's some soap, um, down there. Just right there. Yeah, you got it."[/i]" hahahahahaha so yes i needs to make more fanarts! for FIREMENS! s0o0o0o i wonder what his dad will think when he finds out >:3 i dont know if theres a running plot for this or not, but i think his dad should be all :O plus wow, its only there second date? are they even a couple and he's doing that in front of other people =x wow. raRr! more please, from you and/or miss purple super secret puprle ninja authress :3 nom nom nom
Saholia (Chapter 3) - Sat 26 Sep 2009
| O-M-G! Miss K that was fantastic! Both the latest updates were awesome!
| Hummm well THAT was pervy............ good thing I like pervy (wiggles eyebrows suggestively)
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