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Reviews for Unspoiled by forthright

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Lauren (Chapter 5) - Wed 17 Mar 2010

OHO! So there's my answer. Or reassurance. Sorry fo rthe short review, but... Great chapter. Hazzah for "flushing out".

I just thought of something. The well's filled with water, so how's Kagome supposed to get back through it? Will it magically dry up? Or will she go back another way? A run of the mill portal? Hmm....

~Animefreak242
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Kawaii Girl


Lauren (Chapter 4) - Wed 17 Mar 2010

Oh my god. I don't know why I put off reading this fic for so long. Your Sesshomaru is the most adorable thing ever. His personality and mannerisms are just so... *squees* *o* I like that you've skimpped on a description for the mini Lord. I mean, we all know what he looks like, but it also helps that you're allowing us to fill in the blanks. It may be the hour, but I cannot get over the kawaii-ness that is oozing from this story. I love it.

I'm not sure if I mentioned it before, but I like Hisoka. There's an irony there... He's interesting too. Hen-like in his mentoring. It's sweet. I'm hoping nothing untoward happens to the cat.

Hope all's well on your side of the compy~ *goes to take a nap*

PS: I am looking forward to other color combinations for the demons though. The silver/pewter/white and gold/amber/red bit can get old fast.

~Animefreak242
aka
Kawaii Girl


jojo661538 (Chapter 34) - Mon 15 Mar 2010

will kagome learn something other than what she has like a little self defence? another great chapter keep up the great work ^_^


Hairann (Chapter 1) - Mon 15 Mar 2010

Congratulations Unspoiled has won first place for best canon in the Dokuga 4th quarter awards. You can pick up your awesomely made banner, complements of the lovely Priestess Skye, at http://www.dokuga.com/images/awards/banners/9/6/1766.png. Congrats again and keep up the amazing work :).


Hairann (Chapter 1) - Mon 15 Mar 2010

Congratulations Unspoiled has won second place for best Sesshoumaru portrayal in the Dokuga 4th quarter awards. You can pick up your awesomely made banner, complements of the lovely Priestess Skye, at http://www.dokuga.com/images/awards/banners/9/14/1653.png. Congrats again and keep up the amazing work :).


Beautifully Wicked (Chapter 34) - Sun 14 Mar 2010

AWWWWWW Forthy!!!! I love Bokuseno! He's soo awesome! And you're so great! I really can't wait for he next chapter!


Madeline (Chapter 34) - Sun 14 Mar 2010

lol "Apply leverage?" Very nice :D

Keep up the great work! Loved the chappie and can't wait to see what happens next!!!


GreyEcho (Chapter 34) - Sat 13 Mar 2010

"Apply leverage?" :D Yay for Bokeseno. I'm glade she told him.


KyuubiPandoraChan (Chapter 34) - Fri 12 Mar 2010

I have been checking for this story everyday and it's finally updated. XD Check behind his ears...I can seriously say, the back of our ears a serious business...


Eve (Chapter 34) - Fri 12 Mar 2010

Oh I love this little bits and pieces !  Thank you for putting up another chapter!  Please keep them coming!

>^.^< 

Thank You!

Kiri Kyohaku


Brego Whitecloud (Chapter 34) - Fri 12 Mar 2010

Wonderfully written. I do wonder, as you pointed out, why Ah Un remembered her, but not Sesshoumaru.  Hatred of his father's human mistress, or Rin replaced that memory? Or something else--a knock on the noggin, or he had forgotten because it was too painful to remember.  Or maybe---the dots needed to be connected...

We will have to wait and see, won't we?

 

Well done!

BW


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 34) - Fri 12 Mar 2010

:3 oh i likes that :3


Addy (Chapter 34) - Fri 12 Mar 2010

:D  So cute!  I love that Kagome was just running around making flower wreaths.  And, now she may have found away back to her own time.  :3


Snowfall (Chapter 34) - Fri 12 Mar 2010

That was a very nice chapter.  It's flow reminds me of the way a field of flowers sway back and forth in the breeze.  Very pleasant.  I wonder if Kagome gets her message through.  I like your portrayal of Bokusenou. 

I just thought of something!  How the heck is the well going to dry up for her?  Or, is it?  Well, she has already existed in the Sengoku Jidai, so, if Bokusenou is right, she'll get back there again... maybe.  I can't wait to see what you come up with.  ^_^


kagomesirene (Chapter 34) - Fri 12 Mar 2010

sigh...i'm glad kagome could finally talk to somebody about her problems...though i'm really curious what happened so that sesshoumaru forgot about kagome...maybe hisoka was killed *because of kagome* or somehow he thinks it was her fault and banished her from his thoughts so that he does not remember her or something like that? well you never know...can't wait for the next and very soon update *lol*


Melly (Chapter 34) - Fri 12 Mar 2010

Looooo~vely chapter!  The tree is now perhaps my new favorite character.  Keep up the good work!  You're extremely talented as a writer and I can't wait to read what happens next!


Rowdys girl (Chapter 34) - Fri 12 Mar 2010

This is a lovely chapter, very sweet. It is fun to see Kagome happy and 'Rin-like'. Lol. And I love your Bokuseno, so ancient and wise. I am looking forward to the next chapter.

I found 2 little things:

“A wreath for my hair,” she explained, holding up a finished [circlets] circlet.

[than] ?then? come to hate me.    (I'm really not sure about this one. The first time I read it, I thought THEN sounded correct, now I'm not sure. So I point it out to you in case my first reaction was correct.)

Rowdy


mary (Chapter 34) - Fri 12 Mar 2010

it's like figuring out a puzzle. great stories always have those. thanks for that miss forthright.


Elifina (Chapter 33) - Fri 12 Mar 2010

*adds to the many millions of spam reviews*


(Chapter 1) - Sat 06 Mar 2010

Hey, just wanted to leave a review telling you how awesome your story is. I love it!


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