ok 1) happy birthday and ty for giving us a present. :)
2) is there any way u could not let Kags have any kids just yet, maybe because of the collar round her neck, or the fact that as she says ' u have my body,but not my mind' i mean it's up to u but i feel alittle bad bring kids into to such a nasty "marriage" ie) hearing father's treatment of mother . sorry i don't mean to tell u how to write but it's a personal pet peeve of mine.
3) and i know i have said this before but i can put up with the nasty treatment of Kags if only once Sess realizes he cares he has to crawl threw hell to get Kags to forgive him. and u can forgive almost anything if the person who has hurt u is very sorry and shows that it will never happen again and to me proves that he is very very sorry
4) ty again for a great chapter and keeping writing u have a great talent. :)
autumngold (Chapter 4) - Sat 19 Sep 2009
Sesshoumaru is a complete jerk! Poor Kagome, if this was him not being so bad I hate to see what he is going to do to her in the future. Kagome has no friends with her, and everyone at the castle including Sesshoumaru hates her. I don't understand how she will ever be strong enough to survive. Much less ever come to care for Sesshoumaru. Thank you for the update. I'm a wimp because I'm incredibly scared to read more!
MLMonty (Chapter 4) - Sat 19 Sep 2009
Wonderful! The reactions were very realistic. (which i adore in a fic :) There are a lot of possibilities you can do with this. Will she resent the children she bares as being spawns of her rapist? Will she temporarily/permanently lose her sanity? Will Sesshoumaru use his concubines and if so will Kagome see it as added insult to injury or be relieved? I can't wait to see what you're going to do!
And Happy Birthday!
Wow. Intense, but very rewarding.
kaldine (Chapter 3) - Fri 18 Sep 2009
omgsh i can't wait for more! keep up the good work!
I'm really looking forward to this story! It's gearing up to be a terrific darkfic! I hope we see Kagome fight every step of the way, and I hope that Inuyasha finds out exactly what is happening to Kagome soon - even though he can't do anything about it! I love the line that Miroku and Sango have drawn for Inuyasha too! Please update again soon!
loveless (Chapter 3) - Thu 17 Sep 2009
I do not like sesshomaru right now. I hope Kagome gives him hell in any way she can. Please update soon.
I can see that Kagome is going to be in a lot of pain. Because we all know that she will not give in easily.
stars (Chapter 3) - Thu 17 Sep 2009
please updata
I have a bad feeling that things are not going to go well for anyone in this story, especially Kagome. Inuyasha's a big IDIOT!!!! This is exactly what Naraku would want. I also have the feeling that Kikyo is also in league with Naraku for this situtation to happen. I can't wait for the next chapter.
OMG! Sess is such an a$$hole!!! I don't like him right now. Poor Kagome things are about to get worse for her. Inuyasha is an idiot. How could he ever think trading his friend is a good idea. By reading the first few chapters I get the feeling me and this story will have a love/hate relationship. I look forward to reading how everything will play out in the end.
miwa03 (Chapter 3) - Thu 17 Sep 2009
Thanks for updating! Update again soon!
autumngold (Chapter 3) - Thu 17 Sep 2009
Thank you so much for the update! Your amazing with the way your are updating both of your stories! I have to admit that I might skim through some of the future scenes in this story, but I will keep reading it. I just really hope there can be a happy ending. Post again soon please!
stars (Chapter 2) - Thu 17 Sep 2009
please updata
yes finally it felt like forever I'm happy with this update and want to see the next chapter soon with dark sesshoumaru
Kick him in the balls Kagome!
I am in love with the evil demented nature of Sesshoumaru. Call me crazy but the darkness of this story really appeals to me. Thank you for writing it I can't wait to read more.
Man, Inuyasha's a sucker, twice over. I bet Kikyo was faking that final death just she could have him all to herself. Why do I have the feeling that Sesshy and Kikyo came up with this plan to get what they want? Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter.
Wow! I couldn't help but shudder as I read what Sesshomaru said to Kagome at the end of this chapter:
"I intend to return to my palace with you this very night, chain you to my bed and force my way inside your body. I will take your innocence and fill your womb with my seed. Over and over. From this day forward you are my little human breeding whore. This is the fate Inuyasha has abandoned you to."
This was a very intense chapter and I have a feeling it's going to get even more intense when Sesshomaru gets Kagome back to his palace. Please update again soon! I can't wait to read what happens next!
I have a feeling Kagome is going to be having several punishments coming her way. Because, she never does seem to learn to obey people.
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