Reviews for Seclusion by Oroyukae

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Tana_san (Chapter 71) - Wed 11 Nov 2009

So, all is well with Kagome and Masaru. The whole family is together, safe, under one roof. Finally, it's over. Maybe now they can have some peace to appreciate their coming together without threat of violence. I think a quiet dinner is in order to celebrate the love that has blossomed and formed one big family. Sesshoumaru and Kagome, Hunter and Satomi, Masaru and Kya and InuYasha and Aria. Oh, let's not forget that Souta has a girlfriend too but she isn't in the loop like all these are. And Sessh can create a tea just for the occasion and then Kagome can give birth right there at the shrine so everyone can be apart of the miracle that is about to be born. A Youkai and Miko's blood making this a very special child. I think they should all be there bacause Sesshoumaru sure isn't going to let them off the mountain for a long, long time. What do you think? She's having the twinges and the babe is in position... JEN


Madeline (Chapter 70) - Tue 10 Nov 2009

YAY!! Kagome woke up!! I'm excited because I just know that baby will be comming soon...right? :D Can't wait!! Love the chapter Please keep up the amazing work!! :D Kya and Masaru are so cute!! 


knifethrower (Chapter 70) - Mon 09 Nov 2009

I think Kagome will be all right.  They were all commenting on how big the baby was, so maybe it is just time for him to be born.  I think Sesshomaru and his tea are cute.  I think his tea probably tastes like "Ricola"! 


knifethrower (Chapter 69) - Mon 09 Nov 2009

I hope Kagome and her baby are okay, I don't know what happens if someone who is unconscious or in a coma goes into labor.  She is exhausted as well...  On to the next, so I can find out!


Tana_san (Chapter 69) - Mon 09 Nov 2009

Thank you for your consideration, Lady O, I just knew after all you have done to make this such a successful event that you may have some difficulty explaining the remains of the others. You did a most splendid job usung Grand Pa as the one to come to the rescue as quickly as the others were tending to shower and caring for the injured. The old man can be more useful than just for throwing sutras and yelling, 'Demon be gone!'.  My daughter, PJ, wants to tell you what her thought was to get rid of the bodies. She is quite the comedian in her thoughts.  JEN

--Ma, told me how the last chapter turned out, and then asked me how I would explain away six crispy bodies and one pile of ash lying on the Shrines court yard. I think the answer was simple...

Spontaneous

Human Combustion!

Then she tried to burst my bubble by saying there was six bodies (and a pile of ash), but I was ready!

They were Satanists and in their excitment forgot to read the sign that said 'Holy Ground! Think Twice!' and then BOOM! All over.

Yeah, if you're giving me the look I think you're giving me, you should know I get it a lot... You know, mother just left me alone with her computer and hasn't thought of the consequences of this action so, in light of this; has Ma mentioned our kittens? They are so cute! We have three blacks and one calico. The three blacks are Frost (female), Ember (female), Jareth (male), and the calico is Kyra (also female). Their Mama is Yuffie and we're pretty sure Duo (our Tom) has father two of them. Duo keeps running off the father of the other two. Oh, well, mom's back, it was nice talking to you. -Shi (PJ)


joyouki (Chapter 69) - Sun 08 Nov 2009

Pure Juice! I loved how you expained the "clean up" of chared bodies....good ol gramps! Yea Kya has balls, she's trying and I think Aria will come around.  I can't wait for another chapter! Thanks


REDWOLF (Chapter 69) - Sun 08 Nov 2009

I hope Kagome and her child is ok, pity she's not having twins! I wish Kagome would be able to heal the boy, it would be wonderful!


REDWOLF (Chapter 69) - Sun 08 Nov 2009

I hope Kagome and her child is ok, pity she's not having twins! I wish Kagome would be able to heal the boy, it would be wonderful!


Madeline (Chapter 69) - Sun 08 Nov 2009

YAY UPDATES!! Can't wait for the next chapter!! Poor Sesshy is so worried!!! :(


MLMonty (Chapter 69) - Sun 08 Nov 2009

See the pout :(

 

I'm so sad you left it there. It was simply that good.

 

Good call on how to use the suggestions people left about the bodies. It really came together well. Gramps taking care of it was a nice touch.


Kanna37 (Chapter 69) - Sun 08 Nov 2009

Poor Sesshoumaru, having to wait all that time and worry.  Can't really see him being all that happy with that.  Looking forward to the next chapter...

Amber


Tana_san (Chapter 68) - Fri 06 Nov 2009

I'm hoping you received my PM since I haven't heard back from you and I was having problems getting the submit relay to work. This is getting so engagingly dramactic. First the fight scene left me trying to literally help them fight and then I when Masaru got hurt and Kagome started to gear up with fury... Has anyone else tried to help while watching an action scene in a movie or on tv? I was helping Sesshoumaru use his whip and Yash use his claws and fists... Now this scene is so heartwrenching! No one knows how Kagome and Masaru are going to be and they have to come up with a plausible excuse as to why there's charred bodies in the courtyard. I am assuming the doctor has to cross the coutyard to get to the house, right? Maybe he'll understand if they told the truth since he knows about youkai...??? Especially if they tell him what was happening and knowing they couldn't involve the police because then all the world would then know of the exsistence of youkai...??? I can see the dilemma here in trying to find something that will explain what happened. If the doctor is accepts whats went on then Hunter can do damage control by taking the bodies left and burning a building then throwing them in so forensics will believe they died in the fire. I think this next chapter is going to be a show of your talent with having to explain this and then get rid of the evidence. Hopefully no one else saw anything. I think Kagome and the baby just needed time to rest and restore the energy they dispelled during all this and the baby is fine because Kagome's body's natural ability to protect herself would protect the baby.  What she did was all out phenominal! She only damaged the ones who she was angry at and only grazing the others while not inflicting any damage at all. Great job!  JEN


joyouki (Chapter 68) - Tue 03 Nov 2009

Kudos to another great chapter! This story is completely juicy! Again, you are so descriptive and your writing grabs you!  I CAN'T WAIT FOR ANOTHER CHAPTER


knifethrower (Chapter 68) - Tue 03 Nov 2009

I loved that chapter!  I can see it all coming together, but what are they going to tell the outside world about what took place?  Will the demons come out of hiding?  I can't wait to find out...  I'm glad you made Kya go through so much, it is much better than if Masaru had just taken her back and his mother had accepted her as if she hadn't betrayed him.  Now, after everything that happened, it would be much more palatable...


knifethrower (Chapter 67) - Tue 03 Nov 2009

Wow, that was one amazing chapter.  Great action, it was very dynamic!  I can't wait to find out what happened to Masaru and the others...


knifethrower (Chapter 66) - Tue 03 Nov 2009

Here is the scene where Sesshomaru gets dressed- if I were Kagome, I would have skipped out on the engagement party, given that kind of enticement.  Now here I go ranting about Kya again.  If I were Masaru, I wouldn't be forgiving her.  I was thinking about it, to try to figure out if I was being unjust in feeling that way, when I thought maybe it was a paralel to the InuYasha/Kikyo thing.  Where InuYasha ignored Kikyo's treachery.  The thing is, a person who would do what Kya did just was not a nice person to start with, you know what I mean?  This is not criticism of your story, just my personal feelings toward someone who would do something like that, I don't care if Masaru was a stranger to her or not.  I like that you didn't make up a reason, like her parents were being threatened (I mean at the beginning, when she first became involved).  That would have been kind of weak.  It's best to leave it so that she did what she did, and let Masaru deal with it.  A teenager in love would no doubt be more forgiving in this situation than I...


Madeline (Chapter 68) - Tue 03 Nov 2009

:( Poor Doubty Sesshy! :( Can't wait to see what happens next!!! Please please don't kill Masaru :( Update as soon as you can!! :D Keep up the absolutely amazing work!!


joyouki (Chapter 67) - Tue 03 Nov 2009

OMG! Masaru, can't die! This is a fabulous chapter! I am wondering how kagome's power will affect the pup inside? The details were so juicy! Thanks for updating so fast! Cant wait to read more, I hope there is good news about Masaru!


Anonymous (Chapter 1) - Mon 02 Nov 2009

amazing..just amazing. can't wait for the next update!


Inumaru_Rapture (Chapter 67) - Mon 02 Nov 2009

Wow.  Wow....just...wow. Please update soon... wow


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