To be honest, big paragraphs scare me. Some writers tend to ramble on and on about so many insignificant things... it just gets boring. But you! You chose every single word wisely and with accure precision when it comes to its meaning in context. I loved it :)
Ima keep reading now.
Sorry, I haven't reviewed. That last chapter was great on introspection and showing how everything had calmed down. I don't remember if it was mentioned, but is Kagome going to grow old and die while Daichiro is young? That would be sad. I would love to see Sesshoumaru discombobulated with instances of attempting to properly parent a rambunctious child. Also, I'd like to see Satomi and Hunter, and Masaru and Kya, happily mated. And a big, happy reunion! ^_^ I sure don't ask for much, do I? LOL This has been a great story, one of my current favorites.
joyouki (Chapter 72) - Thu 26 Nov 2009
OMG how emotional and beautiful! Just absolutley juicy!
I love this story I'vn been reading like 10 chapter a day, it realy well writin great work
Snowfall (Chapter 73) - Sun 15 Nov 2009
A very sweet chapter. I just want to hug the proud new parents. Heh, yup, Inuyasha can be a bit dense when it comes to things of a romantic nature. ^_^ I can't wait to see them back at their cabin, and to see Masaru get healed up. I feel sorry for him. I'm also very happy that Satomi has accepted Hunter. Can't wait for them to tie the knot. ^_^
Snowfall (Chapter 72) - Sun 15 Nov 2009
Oh wow! That was a special delivery. Nice job. I'm sure that was difficult to write and you did an excellent job. I could feel everyone's panic. The end of the chapter made me want to cry. So sweet. I'm off to read the next chapter so I can get a look at the wee one. ^_^
A very sweet chapter. I love the pack dynamics. Hey, now that Kenta and his brother are dead (and all of the henchmen), I'm curious if the family patriarch will have issues?
You're awake bright and early this fine morning. I haven't even gone to bed yet. PJ and I took Mom to the hospital last night for extreme high blood pressure. We've been battling this for several months now. I think it was just great that everyone could share this time with Kags and Sesshoumaru. It was a perfect scene. Glad that Kagome nor the baby had any problems and are both safe and heathy. Well gotta go. My bed is calling my name but I just had to check and see if you posted. Until the next time...JEN
That was so sweet!
I thought it was kind of hilarious that Hunter expected Sesshomaru to be "cordial". The thought of Sesshomaru being cordial. Snort. Bet that birth will serve as the untimate bonding experience, however. That's about the only thing I can see bringing the two together...
lol I love the "I- it's a boy" moment... idk why though... lol good job. I like the fact that you update this story quickly. lol i remember when it was only the first five chapters and then all of a sudden there was a flood of them.... iz got some reading to do....
AWWW BABY!!! :D That was one cute chapter :D I cannot wait to see what happens next, and how you will conclude this wonderful story :D
Oh how absolutely perfect! I just knew you'd make this an exciting event. What a way to get Sesshoumaru to fully accept Hunter as a part of the pack/family. I sat here saying, hurry Yash, drive faster. Hurry, Sessh needs help. All the while I kept thinking, watch they'll get there when it's all over and then I was right. At least Satomi and Hunter got to see the baby now because like I said, Sesshoumaru isn't likely to let them off the mountain for quite awhile and I didn't think he was quite comfortable letting them up there yet. Great chapter. JEN
Kanna37 (Chapter 72) - Wed 11 Nov 2009
YAY! And baby makes three.
Amber
Everyone is ok* lol thats what I ment!
YAY!I can't wait for the next chapter! i'm so glad everyone is one :D
joyouki (Chapter 70) - Wed 11 Nov 2009
great chapter! I really liked at the end when Kya was expressing her feelings lying next to massaru. That is getting Juicy!
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