Ok i'm not being negative, but this story is frustrating me!!!!LOL
Sesshomaru really wants Kagome, though i haven't decided if its because she loves Inuyasha or if its because he really just wants her. But he is sooooo going about it the wrong way, forcing her and hurting her is not the way to win her!
But im really anxious to see what happened after the second chapter when he found her by Inuyasha again!
Thanxs for the update, and i look forward to the next one!!!
LdyDarkStr (Chapter 6) - Sun 14 Jun 2009
Absolutely excellent. You have a great plot line with astounding possibilities. I do hope you continue, as I want to see how Kagome is going to distinguish between abuse and cultural differences, how she is going to reach acceptance, and how the storyline will progress.
One thing of note, we have a scene previous where Kagome states it's been 3 years since she made the deal with Sesshomaru. Are the parts that you are relaying flashbacks? I was slightly confused about that.
Please update soon! Thanks~
~Lady~
| You can put at least one bathing scene in the story. I think it will add to what you are already conveying. Great job on the new chapter.
I love it so much! Keep up the great work. And the bathing scene..its really up to you. Just depends on how many more ideas you have ready to show for these two :)
medea (Chapter 6) - Sat 13 Jun 2009
Heh. So her reiki didn't hurt him at all. *sigh* She so defensless. Isnt she supposed to be powerful?
lol Yesss. Write a bathing scene, but burn him a little if he wants more than a bath *wink*
medea (Chapter 5) - Sat 13 Jun 2009
Yeah, I understand that he's yukai and he didnt view this as rape. I'm fine with that. But IF he wants her and loves her in his own way he should have realized that hurting her like this only makes her hate him more. Of course if he only wants a body to rut with and not her love this is the way to go, but if not he should realize that he made a grave mistake.
I, myself could never ever love him after this.On the contrary, I would seek to destroy him somehow.
Its a good story, well written and interesting. Update soon.
| As always, I love this new chapter of your fic. I really like the way you went into Sess laying beside Kagome in bed, remembering how it felt to be held by his mother. This was excellent writing, and very perceptive. Then the whole passage where you used Sess' point of view about Kagome, and how he felt for her, were just golden. I don't know if Kagome views bathing as an escape (from stress), or an escapade (a sexy adventure), but either way, I'd enjoy reading about she and Sess doing it in your next chapter...
| I really like this story. It's really sad but good.
iknow i'm bugging you but i can't help but wonder if this will end well for sess and kags, i love the story but i feel angsty reading it, and an angsty r0o is not a g0od r0o. either way do update so0n! and again r0o hopes this turns out well.
Sokai (Chapter 5) - Wed 10 Jun 2009
| MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! LOL
| This gets better with every chapter. Just because Kagome is now Sesshomaru's mate doesn't mean she has to make it easy for him. Let's just say this; a certain miko and hanyou are not going to like the outcome of this whole mess when they wake up.
TruGemini (Chapter 5) - Wed 10 Jun 2009
| I think Kags can only get stronger from this. I hope she overcomes this.
| he has taken her as his mate against her will, how will she react when she finds out? that's not easy to forgive. nice fic! i'm loving it!!!!
i'm still loving this fic, its hard to take a bit, but i understand and appreciate his POV on thigs i still hope for some kinda happy ending, where in the end kagome and Sess end up happy. i dont know if thats in the plans or possible but i hope for it. - r0o
Ladydot (Chapter 5) - Wed 10 Jun 2009
Getting down to dirty tricks fluffy! Marking her without her permission...oh well it makes life more interesting haha! Can't wait for the next chapter. You're doing a wonderful job
Sokai (Chapter 4) - Sun 07 Jun 2009
| I like it. A little confused at first, but I get it know and I can't wait to read more.
| Ok, so she is pregnant already. Really, what does Sess really want with Kags? He doesn't really love her, does he?
Luna (Chapter 4) - Sun 07 Jun 2009
| I keep wondering if its because of sesshomaru that she has not gotten pregnant yet... Like if hes trying to avoid getting her pregnant because he wants to keep her longer, or because they have basically all eternity since inu is frozen in time and she might be imortal...
I am liking the story so far, tho you have pay a little more attention to grammar.
Ladydot (Chapter 4) - Sun 07 Jun 2009
I thought she didn't have a baby yet! maybe she thinks she's just pregnant.... but what a stubborn girl! Come on ditch inuyasha go for the one that will buy you lots of shiny things! lol Once again another great chapter. Also, a great lemon! Can't wait for the next update :)
oh wow! This is amazing!!!! it gets better every time I read it!!! however, there were a few gramatical mistakes just so you know. I hope that you don't hold it against me. I really do like the story! And I will continue to read it! just so you know, you won't get rid of me! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
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