I read this story before but you never finished it is an old story. Are you going to give an end to this one...
I don't buy that Kago wasn't thining about leaving. She totally was, hence why she called the thought taboo. Still, it's good she finally woke up. The start wasn't pretty, but neither was her so-called relationship with Inuyasha and they are demons, so violence should be expected.
The story picked up by the time the virtues chapter ended and you got a new beta. I really didn't care for that part. Kago came across as super self-righteous despite the fact that she's knocked up by her 'true love's' hated half-brother.
Anyway, I hope your life is going OK and one day you'd come back and finish this story.
ponpiri (Chapter 23) - Sat 22 Jul 2017
These "lessons" from Kagome are kind of hard to take seriously. She's really freaking dumb and oblivious.
jessica (Chapter 32) - Tue 13 Jun 2017
Hey r u gonna finish this fic? I've been here since CHP 1....
snow (Chapter 32) - Tue 27 Dec 2016
what happened! how did... who took him did he leave on his own?
Leticia (Chapter 32) - Fri 26 Jun 2015
I just read all the chapters, yay for me, but now im sad because I dont know how the story ends and there isn't any more chapters to read. I hope you are able to finish the story, im pretty sure there are a couple of us that would be really grateful
Koree (Chapter 32) - Fri 12 Jun 2015
I Feel Like The " start of a nightmare " Has Something To Do w/ Kazuki & Idk Why But The " ultimate sacrifice " Comes Off To Me As Kagome's Sacrifice Of Letting Inuyasha Go Hence Why He Disappeared But That Was Just My Take On It Lol Sesshomaru Made The Biggest Sacrifice Here . I Kinda Feel Like I'm Making No Sence w/ This Review... I've Been Up All Night Reading From Chap 1 To 32 I Was Hooked !! I'm Tired It's Now 5am Lol Anywho Let Me Stop Rambling AMAZING STORY !!!!!
Im so i loove with this story!! Although i do wonder what will kagame do when she encounter inuyasha again. But yeaa li will leave it to the amazing writer hahaha. Enough to drown me in reading it for hours. And 'durian', is it indonesian? XD
Ultimate sacrifice. this fic has been sacrificed......
infidelity is more fun
heh heh
Btw. abortion in stories is fine.... but abortion OF stories is not fine....please write T_T
durian is like awesome!
the bitter one's are the best
should i read this...knowing that its been abandoned....my child and my grandchildren will die knowing that this story will never be ended...how pitiful :(
Page 1 of 22
| | | | | | | | | | | |