I don't think the Americas would really have any youkai of their own other than maybe wolves & caribou. The reason being that I think Baring Strait when it was covered in ice would've allowed some youkai to migrate across it with both humans, wolves, & caribou.
Koiyuki (Chapter 23) - Thu 16 Dec 2021
I can't help but wish Azumi & her family all had Chinese names. I mean, they are in China, so instead of Youkai they'd be called Yaoguai. Their names should reflect this change in nationality.
Koiyuki (Chapter 3) - Tue 30 Nov 2021
I personally find the fact that he fucks corpses absolutely disgusting.
You are such a talented writer!!! Uou have kept me on the edge of my seat this entire story. I know that's it has been a while but I hope one day you decide to update this beautiful work of art.
Your talented writings has inspired me to learn more about myself and my dream to write. Thank you for this great inspiration. Again I hope one day you choose to update and finish this art.
Thank you
God's this story is addicting. I cannot wait to read more. :3
Melissa (Chapter 78) - Fri 10 Jul 2020
I get in these weird moods to reread really good fanfictions Every time I read yours I hope it's updated, but it isn't. All I can hope for is for you you finish this awesome fanfic, I want to see Rin have justice. I want to imagine the end of this fanfic. So if you do ever decide to write again and finish this story know other fans and I will glady read this awesome tale.
Literally such an amazing story! I love your writing and creativity. I don’t know where you are but PLEASE finish this story!!!!
candy (Chapter 78) - Thu 04 Jul 2019
Please update your story's are so good. I need to know how kagame proves that sesshomaru mate killed Rin. Please update I'm begging you.
If you write nothing else, please at least write the scene where Rin is avenged! Following with the hope of an update.
This is fantastic. What a ride. I'm quite fascinated that you have such a crazy character story and romance with one of the two unconscious ???? I'm impressed. Highly impressed. Looking forward to the second half of this story, but I had to leave a note.
I'm enjoying this story very much... except for 1 aspect. The main men/demons are all getting to have both amazing and unpleasant multiple sexual relationships, whereas the main women are stuck with being virgins and being only with one man. Completely unfair, sexist and very double standard. The only women who are getting a healthy or more normal sex life are the villians. The only good guys not fucking around are Koga and Miroku.
I don't know if you still receive reviews from this site, but I am going to leave one and hope that you do.
This is one of my favorite fanfictions of all time and it kills me that you never finished it. I am not new to reading fanfiction. I started reading when my son was a baby and he is now 17 and also reads them. That is a lot of years and a lot of stories, so when I say that this is one of my all time favorites, I am saying it sticks out amongst the thousands that I have read.
I was hoping that maybe you posted the full story elsewhere. If so, if you could please tell me where I can read it, I would be really grateful. If you just never finished it, could you? Please... I know it may be a lot to ask, but I would love to read the ending. Thank you!!
Zahra (Chapter 34) - Mon 16 Jul 2018
This fanfiction is HELLA long. I've never really struggled to finish a fic but it's almost like I'm reading an entire novel. Amazing that you've come up with such a good storyline. However I do have one complaint. I understand that Kagome is the epitome of goodness in the world, but you've made her sort of... too perfect. At the beginning of the story she had her faults, which she worked on, but now it's become a bit annoying how without fault she is, how everyone remembers nothing but goodness from her, especially in the eyes of Sesshomaru. It's true that people usually think good of the dead, but it detracts from her character's demention, in my opinion. She hasn't been awake for the past 200 years, of course, so I guess there's been no opportunity to show that she's flawed, but you went as far as to say she isn't human, which means she's practically a demigodess or something? Considering she's been made from pieces of the Kami themselves. Which would justify how perfect she is. Anyhow, I'm not sure I want such a perfect main character but it is your story, furthermore it's already been written. It's just grown annoying to hear nothing but praise towards her (Evil persons' POV don't count because they are trash). I prefer characters to have some shades of grey. Not saying I want her to be in the least bit evil, but it's not really believable. I know this is a fic and there much more fantastical aspects but it seems so BORING and unbelievable to have such a perfect main character. I don't mean to come across as bashy, but i'm rather disappointed in Kagome's character so far, considering she is so much more multifaceted in the anime. Another thing I find weird is that Sesshomaru would fall so in love with her when he's barely interacted with her this entire time. It's a bit too convenient. I do understand the whole soulmate thing, and that she offers respite from his demanding lifestyle, and animals are supposed to have baser instincts etc etc but it's WEIRD to fall in love with someone who's been all but dead around you for the past 200 years. Almost... creepy.
That being said your writing skills are quite good :) I'm glad I found this fic.
Well I know it's been a long time but I really hope you take this story up again
Pat Wim (Chapter 78) - Fri 25 May 2018
You tell such amazing tales i just want to marry them i am officially obsessed with your work please come back and finish this
RebeL (Chapter 78) - Fri 18 May 2018
Aw man! I really hope this story isn't abandoned! I really enjoyed reading it and i'm dying to see where you planned on going with this story! It'd be a terrible shame for such a great fanfic to never be finished! I know it's been 8 years since you updated it, but i'm still gonna hold out hope that it'll get picked up again someday!
alexis (Chapter 78) - Sun 15 Apr 2018
I wana say wow just wow!!! This story has its ups and down.. has its crying points and laugh ur but off points.. the sentence structure is good as well as the meaning behinds the words written... I’m not a big writter Myself but if I had a writing style it would be something like this... I hope all is well and I will be sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for you to come back to writin!!!
Dryft (Chapter 78) - Sat 03 Mar 2018
wahhhh all caught up and I want more ;_;
Dryft (Chapter 1) - Thu 01 Mar 2018
Flew over here from fanfiction. Love this story. Cant wait to read more from chapter 5! <3
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