| Hey there! I wanted to let you know that I'm completely in love with this story! I love the way you portray your characters and Sesshomaru's devolpment as the years passed was wonderful. Honestly, the only mistakes I saw were ones pertaining to word confusion, like your and you're, or bear and bare, but other than that, this story is very well devolped. I hope you continue to write, and keep up the great work! ~Aubrey
Azurena (Chapter 17) - Thu 18 Jun 2009
o_O Oh my god. . .I couldn't believe Rin died. I thought for sure Sesshoumaru would find someway to keep from killing her. . .that was absolutely heart-wrenching. I'm still in shock. I've loved your story so far, but man. . .that was so sad. At least she'll see them again. That definitely made me feel better :)
| I finished it all... and now I want more. Perhaps I should have read slower??? But I couldn't help it. So I guess I will just have to patiently wait.... I'm dreading what will happen to Kags when she finds certain things out.... and I am so excited for Rin. I can't wait for Azumi to meet her fate... ah there's so much going on and everything thing is so creative and original. You have an amazing story here so keep up the good work.
| Yeah!!! I reached 50!! Kay I am so excited to be so close to where you have left off. There's so much I love and so much I want to know.. but I realize it will be all answered eventually and pointless to ask such questions here. Not to mention I don't want you to think you need to answer my questions by saying... yeah I'll explain that later. Sooooo instead I must tell you the things that have stood out for me. Kagome's powers are something unique. I have read many stories with different takes on her ablities... never have I heard of her creating a net and trapping Sesshomaru (even if it was briefly) Oh and the way Sesshomaru is secretly going about his steps for claiming her... I love it... plus there is so much more but I am just rambling now. Cheers to you and this amazing story!
ok i've read all 61 chapters but thats not enough im hooked so hurry up with chapter 62 so i can keep reading. ^_^
| Wow... I'm so impressed with the detail to this story. You are not like others who simply skip major things and have the character explain events lightly. I love the indepth plotline. It's interesting how Kagome isn't around really because of her sleep but she still has a major role to play as she sleeps (apparently doing nothing is something she is incapable of...lol which is her character through and through)
Anyway I can't wait to read more and promise to continue my reviewing when I return tomorrow night!! Thanks again!
| Wow... I'm only part way done this story but I had to leave you a review. My roommate got me hooked, when I should be working on my own stories. Needless to say I am now wishing for more spare time in a day so I can actually continue to read this. This is so well written, and you leave me wanting to drop everything to continue reading (but as much as I hate it there are people depending on me)... I will review again when I have read more.
Dani (Chapter 61) - Mon 11 May 2009
| OH MY GOD! What an excellent story this is. It has taken me forever to get to this chapter. I love the plot it is absolutely wonderful! I love everything about this story especially the length of it. Many kudos to you and I can't wait for more.
| OK! So it took me five days to read what you have posted so far, and i can say that it was NOT time wasted. It is so good, minor typos here and there, but so well done its amazing. Im surprised that one so long hasn't lost its interest or plot line. Speaking of plot line its so intense and complex you're not sure whos coming from where, the twists and inter plot line and what not are so good. Hojo being Kikyos kid... WOW! Never saw that coming. The fact that rin was to be reborn as sess and kags well yeah saw that but good none the less. Inuyasha needs to pull his brain out of the meat grinder and Azumi needs to hurry up and DIE!!!!!! i hate that C*nt!!! GRRRRRR!!!!!! I hope Sesshoumaru just kills her and doens't worry about breaking the bond cause she's an evil wench! Every thing else i could see how it works for the evil and are important to the plot and i guess she is too but i hate her so much i just want her gone!! Taro is so cute through out this fic i possitively love him!
Any ways enough of my babble, i hope that you find time to post again soon because i am in love with this story!
sunset in love (Chapter 61) - Fri 08 May 2009
i've read it, all the way up to chapter 61, and now i'm totally enchanted by the fic, just like before, words can't even describe how happy i am to finally enjoying it again, and now i can't wait to have more, yours are simply that brilliant!, i guess now rin was a 'gift' for kag & sessh to help kag overcome the shock azumi will graciously bestowed on her, huh! and maybe kaede will be reincarnated especially for inu? hah, just a wishful thinking on my part, you have manipulated the characters to the best of them, even your creation are no less awesome, and i love Taro!!!!
chevonne knowles (Chapter 1) - Thu 07 May 2009
| Oh happy day, i saw your story and i was grinning from
ear to ear. Thank you.!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I read every chapter. I love the way you put the story together.
I do wonder if they will have a happy ending.
The evil side seems for far ahead and the good guys haven't
got a break yet. I worry for kagome
Keep up the good work I am doing the happy dance!!!!!!!!!!!
| Glad you have everything posted over here again. Now where will I read???
HAHA
stars (Chapter 61) - Wed 06 May 2009
| please updata
Yea! Great story, I am glad you are back and writing beautifully. Well I can't wait to see what else happens.
Chelsea H. (Chapter 51) - Wed 06 May 2009
| SWWWWEEEEEEEEEEEEEETTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You're back!!!!! Thank god!!!!!!!!!!!! For the life of me I couldn't remember the right name of this fic and I've been tryin to find it for awhile, only for it to appear again!!!!!!! You are the absolute BEST!!!!!! So please please please please PLEASE don't let anyone tell you any different or let them discourage you cause you are absolutely AWESOME!!!!! Keep on writin, well typin lol. FABULOUS story I might add
sunset in love (Chapter 51) - Tue 05 May 2009
Oh God, you just don't know how happy i am that you are back... YOU ARE BACK!!! hurrayyyy, when you decided to leave i went on sulking for weeks, i just can't get you out of my mind and ... oh dear, it was a torture! Thank You.... Thank You... million thanks and really grateful that you are back, i haven't read it all, i went diretly to chapter 51, so now i'm going to do some backtracking... by transfering it to my phone, s that i could enjoy it before going to sleep at night... i'll leave a review once i've read it all, thank you Texan Lady, love you...
| Welcome back! I am so pleased to see you return and you brought back one of my favorite stories. I hope that all is well and that your recovery for your hands is getting better. I am so happy that you are back. Take care!
Fairqueen (Chapter 1) - Tue 05 May 2009
i am also wondering if u have published and if so under want name?? these people here r in for a treat when they read this story
black smurf (Chapter 1) - Tue 05 May 2009
I'm really enjoy this story. i've been reading it even when it was on fanfiction.net. In my opinion it is a work of art. I was wondering if you have written any books that have been published?
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