Inuyasha is such an ASS!! He's absolutely pissing me off and i can't wait to see what Sesshomaru is going to do to him when he returns and see's Kagome the way she is! It's sooooo obvious she's sick, and i can't believe that Inuyasha is acting the way he is!
Difinitely enjoying your story so far, can't wait to read the rest! Keep up the good work!!
pauly (Chapter 1) - Sat 02 May 2009
Inuyasha is a jerk, Sesshomaru is a sweetie, and Kagome is sick. Great story, can't wait for the reaction of Sessh.
Kagura (Chapter 1) - Fri 01 May 2009
I totally loved this!! When I got to the end I was like nuuuuu!! cuz I realized that there wasn't another chapter XD I hope you update soon I'm really into this already! <3!
| I'm really getting into this, please please update soon!
| I was impressed by your AN regarding the current illness that our country is facing. I really like this first chapter very much. The proposal Sesshoumaru made to Kagome is just so sweet and indeed formal. My father used the term "courting" alot when talking about he and my mother and I grew up just adoring the term. To Kagome it means dating but in reality his asking to get to know her is dating and according to my understanding courting is what you do before a marriage proposal. It's of a more serious nature than just getting to know one another. Today we just skip to the chase and get to know each other while also becoming more intimate as we go along. I like the romance of the way Sesshoumaru is doing it. Good job. I hope it progresses as well. JEN
| I loved it!! I can't wait for the next chapter PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
starkistisbetter (Chapter 1) - Fri 01 May 2009
Marvelous : ) I really really like the way you went about introducing Sesshomaru and Kag's relationship. And I adore how involved Shippo is. Too many authors reduce him to either a child or a liminal character. You've integrated him wondefully. I can't wait to see how this turns out!
Fubuki (Chapter 1) - Fri 01 May 2009
| *hands out holding paper and pen* Please Sora-chan, may I have some more?????
| Awwwwwwww! Please write more really soon. The first chapter is adorable! Inuyasha is such a tool too, you'd think with his sense of smell he could tell Kagome is sick as soon as he entered the camp...must be the graveyard soil.. lol
Aw! I like this story.. Well, at the moment I do and as long as it has a happy ending I will. XD I was going 'aww that is so sweet' like through almost the entire thing. I really like it and your writing and everything! I hope you update soon!
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