Reviews for The Diary by Tomosaho

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DocBevCulver (Chapter 10) - Mon 17 Aug 2009
Oooo, I truly enjoyed reading that chapter and the ending.... perfect! I can't wait to read more. Bravo!

Jezeriah (Chapter 10) - Fri 07 Aug 2009
Yay! I thought this story was dead! You're doing an amazing job, please keep it up!

Arc-an Angel (Chapter 10) - Fri 07 Aug 2009
Wonderful chapter! Love the all that was revealed and how Sesshomaru finally got the message. A little creepy with him laughing but it all fits.

Priestess Skye (Chapter 1) - Tue 04 Aug 2009
Congratulations! You’ve been nominated for a Dokuga Award for Second Quarter 2009 2.0 Best Canon Fanfiction. The Dokuga Awards were created in 2008 to celebrate Sesshoumaru/Kagome fanfiction and fanart everywhere. To see a full list of nominations, please visit http://www.dokuga.com/forum?func=view&catid=16&id=24972#24976. The voting period will begin on Sunday, August 9 and run for three weeks, after which we will announce the winners. Please note that if you’ve been nominated more than once you may receive multiple copies of this message. If you have any questions about the Dokuga Awards, the nomination or voting process, please do not hesitate to contact me. Congratulations once again, and good luck! Priestess Skye

GreyEcho (Chapter 10) - Tue 04 Aug 2009
LOL that was GREAT! I love how he horrified poor Rin and jaken when he started laughing. XD I like how you eneded it. Yay! He finished reading it and knows. and YAY! I can't wait to see what happens.

KAggie (Chapter 10) - Mon 03 Aug 2009
I've read stories based around finding a diary, but I have to say that this is one of the best I've read so far. I can't wait for more chapters to come. I hope you're settling well after studying abroad. I hope I can do that soon, hopefully before I graduate. Well, keep up the great work! P.s. Sesshoumaru laughing: Priceless. XD

Rachael (Chapter 10) - Mon 03 Aug 2009
This story is amazing!! It's so cute that he ends up like all the others that come in contact with Kagome. I was wondering if he realized this and that was what prompted the laughing? It's sad though that the book entries are done. I don't get to read the Kagome thoughts, and consequently miss Sesshy's funny reactions and thoughts regarding them. At least I have the in-person encounters to look forward too. Even if they do look a ways away. Hopefully only one or two chapters away? Or maybe I'll get lucky and it's not too far after all. Keep up the good work!

RosyPaths (Chapter 8) - Sat 02 May 2009
Totally a capturing story so keep on writing! :)

tessahime (Chapter 8) - Sat 11 Apr 2009
Wow. Another wonderful chapter! I have to say, I love the way you had Sesshoumaru take a gamble on Kagome's safety by using Rin and himself as bait. He may no know it yet, but he's totally in the L word with Kaggie! Anyway, you totally have my attention (and a mild case of my obsession) now with this story! I just hope he finishes the damn journal and meets up with Kagome soon!!!! Keep up the great work!

GreyEcho (Chapter 8) - Sat 11 Apr 2009
It just gets better! Can really pin a part I liked more...beside him implying her insane. :P but I love it, And the whole theory into kagome's soul. >.< I can't wait to see where this leads now that someone is looking for her.

stars (Chapter 8) - Sat 11 Apr 2009
please updata

Anonymous (Chapter 7) - Fri 10 Apr 2009
Sesshomaru pondering over love? I really like how the thought is slowly sneaking into his mind. Very interesting, can't wait for the next chapter.

BlessedEpiphany (Chapter 7) - Thu 09 Apr 2009
I absolutely love the way this story is written. Looking inside Sesshoumaru's mind is comical to say the least. Also, that little thing about Inuyasha thinking he was 'wierd'.....classic. This is a solid chapter and even though alot of it is review it's great to see Sesshoumaru's take on everything. Keep up the wonderful work.

Vanja (Chapter 7) - Thu 09 Apr 2009

Hello again :) As I stated before I am your fan so don't be supprised when I'll writing a review now and then.

I liked how this chapter described Sesshoumaru that is thinking about love, is tempted by it and at some level is already crawing it'. Usually (as in other fanfics) Love is something that happens to him - something that he takes as it is or something he fights with. But rarely thinks about.

Vou's review made me realise that I also like the humour in your fic. I mean - i had to re-read the part 'Ah, that would be me' at least 3 times. It was hilarious! But of course other parts are also. That one has just happened to be my favourite one :)

Angelic memories also mentioned something I has been thinking about since I've read this fic. Kagome's diary and Sesshoumaru's thoughts are often so similar. I find ir rather.... annoying.... sometimes. Although it is a nice indicator that they might be soul mates it also makes me wonder - isn't it to convenient? And when thinking about convenient stuff. The entries quite often have stories that Sesshoumaru took part in. They didn't meet so often so I find it a little stretched. But overall I don't mind it so much. 

I also remembered that I love the relationship between Kagome and Kikyo. You picture it as something very complex. You also don't try to 'black' one character in order to make other one a better one. You obviously are not a Kikyo hater. For me it is a plus. Former couples don't have to hate each other to move on with their lives and love. I am very curious how you will explore Kikyo - Kagome relationship.

Good luck with your writing :)


Vou-sama (Chapter 6) - Wed 08 Apr 2009

XDDDD

I was sooooooooooooo going to wait to leave a review until the end, but when Kagome told her rendition of her encounter with Kouga, I finally lost it when Sesshomaru said '....lucky bastard.' Oh Kami, I'm tearing up coz I'm laughing so hard! I seriously enjoyed this and will be sure to mention it to ElegantPaws to read (if she hasn't already) coz she loves humour. It's one of the necessities in a good fanfic. Good job. And I love how Sesshomaru is so tortured coz it's obvious he's developing an attachment to the Miko by simply seeing things from her vantage point. <3


Angelic Memories (Chapter 7) - Wed 08 Apr 2009
I think I've finally realized what I like so much about this story line. The contrast and parallels within the thoughts. It's amusing to see Kagome's thoughts and Sesshomaru's responses and how similar or different those thoughts are... especially when she's speaking of Sesshomaru... I am quite curious as to where you will lead this and can't wait to read more. Ah before I forget I love the historical references you make, and I thank you for the end notes explaining such detail for those who don't understand. They're interesting fun facts... :)

GreyEcho (Chapter 7) - Wed 08 Apr 2009
I can only say I love this fic. I love Sesshoumau's responses to the enteries as they go. And it's a nice look into his mind.

stars (Chapter 7) - Wed 08 Apr 2009
this is great please updata for the next chapter

Vanja (Chapter 6) - Mon 06 Apr 2009

To be perfectly honest I wouldn't read your fanfic if it wasn't recomended as I've already read an original one. But what a surprise! And from the very begining! Your writing style is so vivid and colorful, not flat at all. It's, hmm, like a good cup of spiced fruit drink - the kind my mum does - when you think you' ve got all flavours recognized, there is something more to discover.

So anyway, I'm definitely your fan. I think that plot is very good, and the idea with ragged diary and as a result few entries is to my liking (I am not sure if it was in original one). I also like how Kagome is jumping from one time to another - this is how human mind works, at least for me. Doesn't it for us all?

Sesshoumaru is sometimes a little bit OOC and at the very begining his comments were anoying but after a while I decided it's ok as long as nobody notices - except readers :) . What I mean, he is so expresionless and stoic in anime and manga so the total change would be weird. On the other hand the idea of Him having many different feelings opens so many opportunities. He is quite cute :)  

I also like that he is not so much demonic. I really detest the inner demon-self concept that have linear, vulgar mind (My bitch!, get the bitch etc). Don't get me wrong - your Sesshoumaru is not a copy of a human mind. That was indicated in a love making scene and I like it. I am really curious how his character and demonic culture will be explored and explained. I also want to know more of Kagome. The more fanfics I read the weakest she seems or quite the contrary, super hero she becomes. I dislike both, the former and the latter. So I am very eager to read more about her. But maybe I want to much?

Hopefuly, we - all of your fans will soon have occasion to read more :)

Good luck and please keep writing!

Ps: I forgot to mention another thing I admire. I don't feel a lot of american (or western) culture in your work. Sometimes autors by accident contain a lot of it, even when they try to avoid it. I am not certain if you would understand but I hope it will stay that way. Kagome and her world is 'eastern' and I don't mean the customs etc but rather outlook on life and a specific mood.


Z3R0|R0CK$TAR (Chapter 6) - Sun 05 Apr 2009
this is a reallllllllllllllly good story. I hope you will write again soon

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