Ooooooooo...... Does this mean Kagome is gonna get to purify dear ol' daddy? I can't wait for the head to head with Maeko and Lord Genshu. We all may need a fall out shelter!
I am glad that things have all been worked out for the most part between Sesshou and Kagome. I'm wondering what Maeko, Kagome's mother and the other conspirators are scheming up. And I really hope Genshu visits the mansion soon while Maeko and Kagome's mother are still there. I can't wait to see how they put him and maybe Inuyasha in their places and teach them some manners. And what will Genshu do and think now that he knows that Sesshou has marked Kagome as his breeder. Keep up the good work and update soon :P
| Aw, I really like this story. It's well written and the plot is fabulous. I was a little caught up by how Sesshomaru changed in the later chapters (like lovey dovey) but it's cute. It's nice to see them in love. I hope that the western lord doesn't ruin everything. What a jackass. Any who, keep up the good work!
Great chap! I am happy with how it is progressing!
It is a bit of a refresher with Sesshomaru still being in the transition of being a grown Youkai and a pup! Its a nice change!
Love your work as always!
Good luck
I has a feeling that things may get ugly, very fast. :) I can't wait to see Kagome kick Lord Genshu's ass!! :D *laughs insanely* Oh sorry, I guess I forgot my pills today.
Uh!! This can't possible go well!! I just hope that Kagome is ready for the it.
autumngold (Chapter 28) - Sun 27 Sep 2009
The thought of Kagome in that torture room scares me. I have a feeling the Lord Genshu won't care if she's marked or not. Is there any possible way that you can have both he and Inuyasha killed some horrible way! I don't care if it's Sesshoumaru, his mother, or Kagome who does it. Just as long as it's messy and painful for them. Either that or maybe you could have them neutered? That would work, and all of the women that work for them would be happy. Sesshoumaru had better never take Kagome back to his dad's place. Great chapter! Thanks for the update!
Tilayha (Chapter 27) - Wed 23 Sep 2009
| It took me two days to read this in its entirety. WOW. I laughed, almost cried, got angry and all the other emotions you provoked in the story.
I just finished philosophy of ethics class and I have to say that you have done an exellent job at showing just how different we are as cultures and how dangerous they can be. I've even thought about sending this link to my professor. I think she would like it very much.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Tilayha
REDWOLF (Chapter 27) - Mon 21 Sep 2009
| Well I hope they mate!! Great fic, I read it all this evening!!
| I really loved this chappie. You did a great job getting Sesshou and Kagome to analyze the source of their problems with some assistance from their family. They got a nudged in the right direction and both will have to work very hard to get their relationship to where they want it to be. I enjoyed how you made Sesshou appear vulnerable once he realized how much he had to gain and lose should Kagome decide to be a part of his life or not.
I absolutely loved the vivid descriptions of all the gardens, waterfalls, ponders and the maze on Maeko's estate. I hope you allow Kagome to get a little revenge on Sesshou's father, Inuyasha and maybe Sango. I look forward to ur next chappie. Keep up the good work and update soon. :P
| The more I read of this story the more I love it, I can't wait to see what you come up with next. Lovely work :D
| And the awesomeness continues. I love the bonding stage. It's so sweet and beautiful. Just lovely.
Ava 365 (Chapter 27) - Sun 20 Sep 2009
| I hope you will continue the story showing us how Sesshomaru and Kagome come closer and eventually their mating. I really like were this is going. Great work!
autumngold (Chapter 27) - Sun 20 Sep 2009
| I'm glad that Sesshoumaru is going to make Kagome his mate when she is ready! I'm also happy that they are going to talk to each other, to share their thoughts, feelings and fears! That will only make their friendship and love stronger. Thank you so much for your wonderful update! I really, really hope that Kagome gets the opportunity to do some damage to Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru's dad. They really deserve it!
| I haven't reviewed before, because I had so much to catch up on for this story. I apologize for not reviewing sooner. I really do love this story, while it has some 'drama' it comes in good doses. All of your chapters flow together and are written so nicely. Its good you know what you are writing about, for certain categories then just writing events such as this without thinking it through. The characters are all amazing and so well written. It feels like you can feel them and how they are feeling while reading. Its amazing, this is one story I can actually read the chapters through, instead of just skimming the words. Wonderful job. I also really love how you made Sesshoumaru's mother, along with his relationship with her. I also like the progression between Kagome and Sesshoumaru. Anyways, please update when you get the chance. I'm looking forward to reading future chapters :)
| That's great! They are actually opening up and talking. Rome was not built in a day, and the relationship they have started to build again will take time too. Wonderful job on the progression you two. So glad you are not just jumping ahead to happily ever after. Please continue the awesome work!
| ohhhhhh...finally they had the chance to really talk *sigh* ...i'm really happy...even though for me sesshou was a tad too emotional 0.=
i really cannot wait for kagome,sesshou and his *parents* to return to kyoto and the confrontation with lord *can't keep his pants on* *lol* that is sure to happen in the near future
...please keep up the good work and update soon :)
| So....I'm confused, is it over?
| YES!!! Now they're finally understanding each other... and who knew Sess was such a softie? So romantic, and I don't think he was trying to... aw. Great chapter, hope to read more soon!
| HI! I'd like to offer my help with the German parts of your story. Since I'm a native German speaker, I think my grammar and spelling is good enough. I'm sorry to say, but you German is bad enough to make me wince.
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