| Rose your story is hilarious. I love it. You are a great writer.
wiiTneSs (Chapter 16) - Fri 03 Oct 2008
| This is addicting. Can't wait 'til more characters are introduce esp the character who said he was gonna pay Sesshoumaru a visit =D!
LC Rose (Chapter 16) - Fri 03 Oct 2008
| Ah, what a horrible place to leave me hanging!!! Totosai was adorable, btw. This story is addicting and I can't wait for more.
| love it cant wait for the next update
amadoni (Chapter 16) - Tue 30 Sep 2008
| interesting story we have here. can't wait for an update.
| more more more!!! plz
ur story is sooo good! cant wait 4 the rest of the story hun!
sugar0o (Chapter 16) - Sat 27 Sep 2008
| omg Totosai's chapter had me cracking up i just started this and i cant wait for you to update once more, this was amazing. - r0o
| u gotta update soooon!!!
| nothin quite like the chase! Can't wait for the capture!!
shae (Chapter 16) - Fri 19 Sep 2008
| So I read the review and saw the number of chapter and figured this would be a nice story to span a few hours of my time. I don't like feeling like an addict. You know, read one or two great chapters, then have to wait weeks for my next fix. While the story was awesome, I finished the entire story in under an hour!!! I'm sure you have your reasons for shorter chapters and I'm sure long chapters are time-consuming... but you're killing me!
Anyway, great work.
| Totosai and Miroku are FLIPPIN hilarious. Please Continue Soon.PLEASE!
sunsetinlove (Chapter 16) - Thu 18 Sep 2008
| wow, nice plot... like it... so, when the next chapter? does not mean to be rude... but just too excited... you are a marvel at this..
snowbird (Chapter 16) - Sun 14 Sep 2008
| Miroku is hilarious. I bet he already knows who and/or what she is. He must know of some legend about a strange female that appears out of nowhere to rid the world of an evil presence. Or whatever you have planned for him to tell. Sesshoumaru needs to let his curiosity be stronger than his impulse to kill her. Also, why was she so anxious to escape in the beginning anyway? She acted without thinking. If they had meant to harm her, she would have awoken in a dungeon instead of in a nice warm, comfortable bed with clean clothes. I think it was rather stupid of her to act before finding out where she was and what were their intentions. After all, forewarned is forearmed. Also, you can't blame Sesshoumaru for being angry and leery of her. She did damage his home and destroyed a dojo that was ancient and had a lot of history to it. It was evidently something he was proud of and considered part of his heritage. I'd be mad at her too. Normally, I would be completely on her side, but Sesshoumaru does have some right on his side, too. I don't want him to kill or injure her again, but I would like to see him subdue her because I am a little disappointed in some of her actions. I'm looking forward to the chase. Please don't make us wait too long.
Possessed (Chapter 16) - Wed 10 Sep 2008
| Ohhh, we got a runner! Another nice chapter. Can't wait to see what Miroku's up to!
| It's really an interesting story! I really can't wait for more... Run Kagome the 'thing' is just behind you! *grin*
| It's really an interesting story! I really can't wait for more... Run Kagome the 'thing' is just behind you! *grin*
UtterChaos247 (Chapter 16) - Wed 10 Sep 2008
| woo!! an update *^_^* i wanna know what MIroku's planning...
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