"Give me air; please review?" Lol. Give me air, leaving me holding my breath at the end of that chapter! This is the first time I've read your story, and I must say that it is absolutley fantastic! I am entranced. I like how you've characterized the main cast, with Sesshoumaru's deadly grace at the forefront, and Kagome's bumbling drive at destruction of things she doesn't understand. Nice use of Miroku btw. I am also enjoying the personification of the sword. I almost woke up my roommate giggling at Totosai. :D You may think that your chapters are short, but I think that it makes the story feel fast-paced, when really the sequince of events is moving along nicely.
Thank you for sharing,
Kyuthe
| Your Killin Me. Please Update Again Soon. I Really Am Enjoying This. Your Sess Is Such A Dog.. Checking Her Out In Wet Clothes.. THAT'S HOT!
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okay now that i got that out of me, another lovely update though whoever is after kags i would hope that with the handy dandy shikon sword Kaggie could woop toosh! anyway love this, more please ^_^
Nefret (Chapter 20) - Wed 07 Jan 2009
Finally finished! That was definitely an enjoyable read. I really like the strange mix of modern and feudal you've set up in this AU -- and I really enjoyed the beginning setting. It's nice to see a Kagome with a backbone! and her interactions with Miroku are fantastic.
You've got a great sense of dialogue, and some lovely prose.
I'm definitely looking forward to your next update.
-Nefret.
LC Rose (Chapter 20) - Wed 07 Jan 2009
| Told you he'd dump it on her!!! :-) And preserved his gentleman-ness by letting him give her a blanket. Now you've left me wondering once more. What was the dream and who's at the gate? Huh, huh, huh? Not gonna tell me? Fine. Until later then. Same Rose channel, same Rose time.
| Awesome! Can't wait for the next chapter.
| wow Kagome got a mental one over. can't wait to see how it is, though I have a guess. can't wait!
I LOVE THIS! now who's at the front do0r r0o wonders
Poor Kago. Well this is about to be one rude wake up call. lol. Love this!!
| I hope you tame down her temper some. She's been behaving more like a female Inuyasha in this story by acting before thinking and too eager to swing her sword at everything. All she needs is a red outfit. It makes me be completely on Sesshoumaru's side and hoping that he's successful in subduing her.
| haha! That's goping to be an unpleasant wake up call. Can't wait to see what happens!
i love this but since you want sustanence in the review i'm going to say this:
While i love this, i have to say i long for more. I think the characters are very in character but at the same time, we have Kagome painted thusly as a super woman with ninja skills galore and she has yet to whip those puppies out at all, even when facing the great tai. i kinda want to see her get into action soon, b/c i cant help but think he many chapter you'll have before you get to the meat of the story, as we have yet to even get a glimps of the real villian here. all that being said, i'm just wondering i guess when we'll get there. - r0o
LC Rose (Chapter 19) - Mon 05 Jan 2009
| You left us hanging again, Rose. Evil, evil, evil!!!! But thank you so much for the wonderful update. I really want to see what happens when Kagome gets the water poured on her. I really, really do. That temper of hers is going to flare!
| I'm so happy you updated. I really liked this chapter, I wondered if he'd put something in the tea. Can't wai tto see what happens.
why do they keep knocking her out, ever time they knock her out she wakes up and kills the palace in some way shape or form, his contractors are going to be busy if they dont stop knocking her out. how silly of them, good update, though i must say I WANT MORE!!! - r0o
Bella (Chapter 18) - Sat 06 Dec 2008
I am so glad you updated...This is truly an amazing story, I love the way you have taken your time to build it...not rushing into battle or romance of it head on. There are not very many stories like this one I have patience for...your story, however, is an exception...It is well written and well thought out and I love it. Please continue it soon...I look foward to your update.
| Oh no. They keep knocking Kagome unconscious. Why can't they keep her awake!!?? Grrr!!
| awesome~!
sugar0o (Chapter 17) - Thu 09 Oct 2008
| omg update again!, i was really happy to find this story so far in already but when i did i quickly read through it and find myself longing for your next update. this was interesting to say the least but at the same time, UPDATE! :bounces around like f0ol: its a grand story!
Possessed (Chapter 17) - Thu 09 Oct 2008
| GAH! Type more, hurry! I love anticipation, but come on... you're killing me! ;) I really enjoy this story, and I look forward to the updates...
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