I just really like how you describe the scenery and setting in this story because I can clearly see the scene that you are writing. It's really nice to get lost in the story that way. I don't know if you've ever seen it/read it, but I'm just getting Natsume Yujinchou vibes from this story. It's just got that same slice of life, historical feel to it.
And Kagome, don't you know to be careful when driving! What were you thinking!
I am a little annoyed with Sango, but I understand where she is coming from. And Sesshomaru and Kagome meet!
Oh, and that Inyasha fact: That's so cool and such a nice coincedence.
Absolutely in love with this story so far--your writing style is lovely and captures interest with ease, and it feels natural. I can't wait to see where you take this, and I'm excited for the next chapter!
I love this story! I can't wait for the next update.
This was amazing! OMG! I still have not caught up on your last story, and here you are with something that is absolutely beautiful. Sesshomaru as an Inugami who needs to find his purpose in life? Such a brilliant idea. And the rest? The way you started this story is amazing. I really can't wait to read the rest. (I'm just too excited about the first chapter to properly review right now. I'll have a better review up for your next one).
Ooh this was a fun beginning! I appreciate all the research you put in to make it as accurate as possible and I love how you showed the progression to Sesshou as we know him, cold and stoic. I'm super excited for another chapter here. thank you for sharing with us!
| Definitely loved it. I'm looking forward to what happens next.
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