Okay! Now that Champions League Football is done, my team won, and I have time: I can finally read and review. I'll be writing this review as I read, so be prepared for a ramble.
Oh, Miroku. I can really understand where Sango is coming from, but I really felt for Kagome when the fight happened. And then, when he came to the rescue, I was like "Yes, Go Miroku!" Basically, I love your characterization of him. I always saw him as the wise friend who jokes around (like Sokka in ATLA) and you, I feel, nailed my view of him. So yeah, really liking your Miroku.
I've said it once, and I'll say it again- your description of the tiny town is just amazing! I love reading those sentences becuase it paints such a lovely picture in my head of the area. Besides, those were the same sentences that inspired my own story, so yeah, kudos to you there.
I like the idea of her naming him "Sirius." (Though, the minute I saw that, my mind did go to another Sirius-Sirius Black).
I'm kind of excited to see where this goes.
And then, the fact that you went above and beyond and looked up star maps - that is amazing. I'm really excited about this story, and looking forward to reading more!
Blommie8 (Chapter 2) - Sat 29 May 2021
im in, i'll subscribe you!
Anika (Chapter 3) - Fri 28 May 2021
Lol hahah me rei tanto
hw (Chapter 3) - Fri 28 May 2021
I love this story more and more with each chapter! So glad Sango and Kags were able to make up, it sucks to be at odds with your sister-friend. Both had good points though...totally empathized with both of them.
I kinda felt like the two gods did when Sess decided to stay. Thank goodness he relented! And how cute when he curled up next to her on the bed. <3
Sooo, is Inuyasha a cop? I'm dying to know what's up with him and the mystery around him (the rumors, why people assume the worst with him, was he really working when he hung up on Kags???). You're teasing us with little breadcrumbs of info about him and its working! haha!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
lmao! Bonus orphan! Orphans for everyone
this line has killed me dead. Yomi and Amatsu are the best.
His indecision is so cute! and I love how he transformed and then immediately went into satiating his curiosity lool and yay I'm happy Kags and Sango made up. Also, of course Inu is cheating on her, I wonder if Sesshou is gonna be the reason how she figures it out.
Can't wait for the next chapter, thanks so much!
That was a great chapter loved how you worked it out with the worrysome friends to giving Kagome a chance with Sesshomaru. Now he has a home and soon he'll learn that he's free to do whatever he wants but his heart will go out to Kagome even more once he learns why she is alone. Enjoyed the cast, Koga and his bakery the twins and the vet center with Miroku and Sango... Still hate Inu Yasha he is either an Insurance agent or a cop... Let's see what happens next.
Oh wow loved the chapter so many fact finders there... Love how you created the Inugami that was heart breaking to read I've rescued actual dogs buried up to their necks some dead one lived. Humans can be cruel creatures. I love the story so far and the moon and star Gods are comical at best... I enjoy funfilled drama and supernatural stories can't wait to read more... Thank you for creating a wonderful story.
hw (Chapter 2) - Thu 27 May 2021
OMG I am loving this story so much! Can't wait to see how Sesshoumaru acclimates to living with Kagome. Will he attempt to run off? Will he decide he likes her company and stick around? Will she accidentally discover his humanoid form and freak out? And what's up with Inuyasha and the "rumors" about him? I have so many questions!!! :)
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