Also I friggin love Sango! I love this story too! The situation just urgghhhhh pissed me of! That's just how good this story is and everyone should read it! Bc trust me I'm picky with my Sess Kags stories! So if I say one is good, it most definitely is! Im just reviewing as many chapters as possible bc that's the only thing we can do here to support completed stories.
Ok honestly what on earth? So this is the same Kagome who called Inuyasha when she found out he was cheating? She even questioned him to give him the benefit of the doubt despite know in her heart of hearts that Inuyasha was no good. But she texts Sesshomaru, no questions asked? The same guy she knew was way better than Inu? After one picture?! He's not even kissing Kikyo and his hands are full. Plus realistically Koga should have heard Sesshomaru tell that woman no since he had enough time to pull out his phone and run the camera. And he would not have made the same mistake of sending Kagome pictures after how she reacted last time. On top of that the way Kikyo came through was wayyyyyyy too aggressive. I guess we can say it was one of the Gods but it makes no sense, the other Gods would have stepped in. It just seems like a rush to give the story some drama and end it quickly.
Kagome is becoming more and more of an annoying character since she chose to go out with Koga after finding out about Sesshomaru in the first place. She's seemingly being toxic even to Sango. She's the type of friend I'd avoid bc they only call u when they're single or need u for something! But since they're nice good people, u put up with it for years!
It would have been better if Kagome walked in on Sesshomaru then she catches on something is not right, then Inuyasha appears to threaten all of them.
Angela (Chapter 13) - Fri 10 Sep 2021
Those two are so cute together! And don't worry, you did SO much better than I would have on the smut. Honestly, better than a number of Kindle authors I have read. The trick seems to be working emotional development and the unique character personalities into it. If a scene just focuses on the smut itself, it tends to be not much different from a million other scenes.
You have me a little worried about what is going to happen next!
Angela (Chapter 10) - Fri 10 Sep 2021
Still loving it! Miroku is a mess and his scenes are so funny. That is hole sugar daddy bit lol...And I completely agree with Sango on the monster romance romances (Erica Woods, Tiffany Roberts, Kathryn Moon ????). But Sess is still my favorite!
Now that she knows, I am super curious to see where they go from here.
Angela (Chapter 8) - Thu 09 Sep 2021
I wasn't planning to review on this chapter but I am laughing so much at Sess having to watch porn with and get sex ed from Miroku of all people. Poor guy may never be able to look at Kagome again!
Angela (Chapter 6) - Thu 09 Sep 2021
Still enjoying it! Sess is a little out of character as you said, but since he he has an entirely different life and back story, changes are inevitable. And really, how else are you going to get the proud demon to be a cute pet dog? I am loving how he is protective of Kagome and becoming attached despite himself.
I knew it!! I've been waiting to sing this: "And I know she knows, and I know she knows"
Angela (Chapter 3) - Thu 09 Sep 2021
So far this is a pretty fun story! It had wrangled bursts of laughter and empathy from me. I love the combo of beautiful, thoughtful writing and silliness. My favorite part so far was the god saying "orphans for everyone!" Like some kind of Oprah God. That was hilarious! I have been reading a lot of reverse harem romance on Kindle lately and there is a sad lack of good humor. So if you ever wanna take up writing RH ????????????...
That was a close one! I thought she knew!
Yes Author, this Sesshomaru works perfectly! Especially with the back story
And a oopp! When they said it was a toss-up between her and orphan I paused like oh boy. I'm guessing the author meant Sessh would take care of Rin, not u know marry her. I still can't watch the new show bc Sessh is Rin's baby daddy & I can't get pass that. All those years of reading her as his kid here on Dokuga makes it impossible for me to see her as his partner.
Sesshomaru is subtly hilarious. I like this
Wow I honestly had a hard time staying focused on the first chapter. It's good writing it's just that my mind works weird sometimes. Anyway I know this right here is really good so I'm going to give it a shot. I like the premise of the story. I look forward to it.
Fantastic ending! I CRIED!
But thats when you know its a good story!
I loved the story..... Thank you for writing it...... Beautiful......
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