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Jessie (Chapter 16) - Tue 07 Mar 2023

Ok for real though one of the best stories ever it's like reading a legend 


Jessie (Chapter 6) - Mon 06 Mar 2023

Ok for really though I've laughed soo hard reading this omg I love this story so very much, this is one of my favorites 


Tiamat (Chapter 16) - Sun 17 Oct 2021

Olá! Queria dizer que adorei sua história e como pode ver faço questão de até traduzir cada capítulo para acompanhar, não sou muito de comentar mas acredito que depois de sentir tantas emoções em uma única história me senti no dever de agradecer e deixar claro que espero ansiosa a próxima história! 


Angela (Chapter 16) - Sat 11 Sep 2021

Wonderful job! I am so glad I found this story. It was amazing and that ending full of dog puns couldn't have been more perfect for the story. I am so glad I decided to come back and poke around a bit to see if there were any good new stories I have missed because of my kindle obsession, and I am so glad I did. I will see what else you have going on.


Seluna Maru (Chapter 16) - Sat 11 Sep 2021

This story! What a whirlwind! I enjoyed it


Seluna Maru (Chapter 14) - Sat 11 Sep 2021

Also I friggin love Sango! I love this story too! The situation just urgghhhhh pissed me of! That's just how good this story is and everyone should read it! Bc trust me I'm picky with my Sess Kags stories! So if I say one is good, it most definitely is! Im just reviewing as many chapters as possible bc that's the only thing we can do here to support completed stories.


Seluna Maru (Chapter 14) - Sat 11 Sep 2021

Ok honestly what on earth? So this is the same Kagome who called Inuyasha when she found out he was cheating? She even questioned him to give him the benefit of the doubt despite know in her heart of hearts that Inuyasha was no good. But she texts Sesshomaru, no questions asked? The same guy she knew was way better than Inu? After one picture?! He's not even kissing Kikyo and his hands are full. Plus realistically Koga should have heard Sesshomaru tell that woman no since he had enough time to pull out his phone and run the camera. And he would not have made the same mistake of sending Kagome pictures after how she reacted last time. On top of that the way Kikyo came through was wayyyyyyy too aggressive. I guess we can say it was one of the Gods but it makes no sense, the other Gods would have stepped in. It just seems like a rush to give the story some drama and end it quickly.

 

Kagome is becoming more and more of an annoying character since she chose to go out with Koga after finding out about Sesshomaru in the first place. She's seemingly being toxic even to Sango. She's the type of friend I'd avoid bc they only call u when they're single or need u for something! But since they're nice good people, u put up with it for years! 

 

It would have been better if Kagome walked in on Sesshomaru then she catches on something is not right, then Inuyasha appears to threaten all of them. 


Angela (Chapter 13) - Fri 10 Sep 2021

Those two are so cute together! And don't worry, you did SO much better than I would have on the smut. Honestly, better than a number of Kindle authors I have read. The trick seems to be working emotional development and the unique character personalities into it. If a scene just focuses on the smut itself, it tends to be not much different from a million other scenes.

You have me a little worried about what is going to happen next!


Angela (Chapter 10) - Fri 10 Sep 2021

Still loving it! Miroku is a mess and his scenes are so funny. That is hole sugar daddy bit lol...And I completely agree with Sango on the monster romance romances (Erica Woods, Tiffany Roberts, Kathryn Moon ????). But Sess is still my favorite! 

Now that she knows, I am super curious to see where they go from here.  


Angela (Chapter 8) - Thu 09 Sep 2021

I wasn't planning to review on this chapter but I am laughing so much at Sess having to watch porn with and get sex ed from Miroku of all people. Poor guy may never be able to look at Kagome again!


Angela (Chapter 6) - Thu 09 Sep 2021

Still enjoying it! Sess is a little out of character as you said, but since he he has an entirely different life and back story, changes are inevitable. And really, how else are you going to get the proud demon to be a cute pet dog? I am loving how he is protective of Kagome and becoming attached despite himself.


Seluna Maru (Chapter 9) - Thu 09 Sep 2021

I knew it!! I've been waiting to sing this: "And I know she knows, and I know she knows"


Angela (Chapter 3) - Thu 09 Sep 2021

So far this is a pretty fun story! It had wrangled bursts of laughter and empathy from me. I love the combo of beautiful, thoughtful writing and silliness. My favorite part so far was the god saying "orphans for everyone!" Like some kind of Oprah God. That was hilarious! I have been reading a lot of reverse harem romance on Kindle lately and there is a sad lack of good humor. So if you ever wanna take up writing RH ????????????...


Seluna Maru (Chapter 8) - Thu 09 Sep 2021

That was a close one! I thought she knew!


Seluna Maru (Chapter 6) - Thu 09 Sep 2021

Yes Author, this Sesshomaru works perfectly! Especially with the back story


Seluna Maru (Chapter 3) - Wed 08 Sep 2021

And a oopp! When they said it was a toss-up between her and orphan I paused like oh boy. I'm guessing the author meant Sessh would take care of Rin, not u know marry her. I still can't watch the new show bc Sessh is Rin's baby daddy & I can't get pass that. All those years of reading her as his kid here on Dokuga makes it impossible for me to see her as his partner.


Seluna Maru (Chapter 2) - Wed 08 Sep 2021

Sesshomaru is subtly hilarious. I like this


Seluna Maru (Chapter 1) - Tue 07 Sep 2021

Wow I honestly had a hard time staying focused on the first chapter. It's good writing it's just that my mind works weird sometimes. Anyway I know this right here is really good so I'm going to give it a shot. I like the premise of the story. I look forward to it.


Wynter89 (Chapter 16) - Mon 06 Sep 2021

Fantastic ending!  I CRIED! 

But thats when you know its a good story!


SmilingFool (Chapter 16) - Fri 03 Sep 2021

I loved the story.....  Thank you for writing it......  Beautiful......


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