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MiniMank (Chapter 7) - Fri 04 Sep 2020

OMGGGGG???????????????? I loved loved LOVEEEEEEEDD THIS CHAPTER its should be a whole story based on it I really want to know and see how it unravels in the end 


Lauren (Chapter 6) - Thu 03 Sep 2020

I didn't even think of Jinenji as a possible husband. I feel bad for counting him out because he's so sweet and understanding. He obviously cares about Kagome a lot. It's too bad Kagome has already shown/proven that she isn't overly fond of a slow sedate life.

 

 

Kohaku was more mellow than I thought he'd be. While I expected the nightmares to persist, maybe forever, I thought he'd of enlisted Sango and Miroku to move back to the Slayer's Village and help rebuild. I hope he and his Kagome can work past his fear and have more of a family than they already do.

 

 

So, there's a reality where Naraku won? Or did he unknowingly get away and that's what allowed him to kill Sesshomaru in Kohaku's timeline?


Libitinaluna (Chapter 7) - Thu 03 Sep 2020

Omg!!! Thats sooo sweet!!! And so glad she whooped naraku good!!!


Mecca (Chapter 7) - Thu 03 Sep 2020

This chapter... wow. That was exquisite. That last part reminded me of Yona of the Dawn, the kiss scene when he was giving her water, just as Yona did for Hak when he was too weak to drink. That did funny things to my heart <3 I love how you put that into a tragic scene with Sesshoumaru and Kagome just trying to survive together, and how even in his most feral state, he recognized and protected Kagome. Sigh. Can't wait to read the next installment! 


Arc-an Angel (Chapter 7) - Thu 03 Sep 2020

This chapter broke my heart in a beautiful way. Just the different illusions, the story of how Naraku came back and Sesshomaru...this 'marriage' was a lot to process. But hopefully the knowledge she's gaining can help avoid some of these horrific pathways later on.


Peridot Miko (Chapter 7) - Thu 03 Sep 2020

Great chapter! You've kept the surprises coming all throughout the story. Can't wait to see what's next. 


Neelixonee (Chapter 7) - Wed 02 Sep 2020

Oh man!  Loved it sooo much!  I love Naraku, despite his evilness.  I love how this chapter came out.  What a great twist and resolution to the problem, and great tie in to the other chapter as well.


Ashleekyle (Chapter 7) - Wed 02 Sep 2020

Wow!!! Just wow!!! This chapter was amazing and so sad.  It was well written, and devastating at the end to think she has been abused to this point.  This story is an amazing concept and you can witness kagomes character growth as well as yua.  Great orginal character by the way.  I was hoping for some brevity at the end of this chapter.  It was so heavy, but sometimes life is that way.  Good build up to it as well with the relationship with kohaku.  I must say I am anxiously awaiting the sesshoumaru as a husband chapter but the build up is nice.  I keep anxiously seeking them out in each chapter.  cant Wait for the next update.  


Ryo chan (Chapter 7) - Wed 02 Sep 2020

Aww theyve been through so much together ='( so sad cant wait for your next chapter 


Nicole (Chapter 7) - Wed 02 Sep 2020

I continue to be amazed with this story. Genius. Pure genius! I can't wait for Sesshomaru but I also never want this story to end T.T 


SmilingFool (Chapter 7) - Wed 02 Sep 2020

Wow that was intense...  Now Kagome knows how Naraku came back and she has the means to destroy him....  I hope all is well in Kagome's original world....  Who's up next?  Sesshomaru?

Love the story update soon.


Tilayha (Chapter 7) - Wed 02 Sep 2020

This chapter made me cry...


Kitty (Chapter 7) - Wed 02 Sep 2020

Is kagome me a dark miko now? I really hope that doesn't do hurt her in the new time lines? Whats going to happen now? Will kagome be very different from usual? What about sesshoumaru, it seems like in every timeline he cared about her? I can't wait for the new chapter! Love this story! Left us on a cliffhanger cause I really want to know what happens next!


ECCougar (Chapter 7) - Wed 02 Sep 2020

Fantastic! Naraku master of mind games, is always fun to read. Excellent chapter, a great way to approach Naraku as a "husband". And that little stint at the end there when she wakes up was... Both heart shattering and relieving. 


Arc-an Angel (Chapter 6) - Mon 31 Aug 2020

P.s- Was hoping ''he' would show up, so this newest marriage should be interesting Lol But also, really love the fact that these glimpses are not for nothing. Yes Kagome is realizing ways to help her friends but it means so much to see how you're displaying different relationships as well as her own self analysis and inner growth. 


Arc-an Angel (Chapter 6) - Mon 31 Aug 2020

I've spent the night catching up on your newest one shots and then stumbling upon this story. I said it once and I'll say it again, your world building and alternate concepts are amazing and so well developed. It's crazy!! Thank you so much for sharing your writing. I just love your stories so much and can't wait to see what happens next in this tale <3


Naoko Ichigo (Chapter 6) - Wed 26 Aug 2020

Jinenji was... probably the most different kind of husband for Kagome but it was funny to read it. And Kohaku... well, it was interesting that ship. 


Saraf Anjum (Chapter 6) - Mon 24 Aug 2020

Okay, I'll make a speculation here.

 

"I was hired as a demon slayer to work in the next village over from Kaede's. You were there, acting as a miko to the people and treating them. We started talking and you seemed somewhat...sad. I realised you were looking at my weapons and offered to help you practice if you were out of shape a little."

 

Kagome was sad here coz Sessh?maru died. She wanted to learn fighting coz she didn't get to help Sessh when he was in danger. Was she like Inuyasha? Helping out somewhere else out of Kaede's village. Anyway, out of guilt or something, she left that village to live in the next one. I guess this Kagome liked the demon lord, be it platonic or romantic. In all the universes, they gravitate towards each other, even in the one where he's married/ mated.

Thank you for such a long chapter. Love your writing ????


KShadeslady (Chapter 6) - Sat 22 Aug 2020

You packed so much into that chapter. Wow! And UGH...Naraku! Can't wait for the next chapter! 


KShadeslady (Chapter 5) - Sat 22 Aug 2020

These chapters are all so interesting. Her journey of self discovery has had its ups and downs but Sesshomaru is still in the center of it all. 


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