Reviews for Only Human by susie

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hw (Chapter 6) - Wed 22 Jan 2020

Loving this story and this chapter was so so good. It was great to see the brothers come to an understanding of sorts. And you had me dying at the end with Kagome and her mom! LOL! Poor girl. 


Esnix (Chapter 6) - Sat 18 Jan 2020

hahahahaha omg that last part had me in stitches!! Poor Mahone. Look forward to seeing her revenge against Sesh!


Neelixonee (Chapter 6) - Fri 17 Jan 2020

LMFAO!  Oh Mama Higurashi!


witty (Chapter 6) - Fri 17 Jan 2020

I liked that tidbit with Sesshomaru explaining his and Rin's relationship. Any inking of sessxrin in a story repulses me. Kagome's mom LOLOLOL!

Nice chapter:)


Arc-an Angel (Chapter 6) - Fri 17 Jan 2020

I'm dead right now lol Her mother was so aggravating. Like come on mama Higurashi! If Kagome was getting it againat a tree 500 years in the past, you would be none the wiser Lol But I am interested to see how this new gift plays into things later on. Also, I like seeing the brother's talking. Even if there's taunting, I feel like they learned something about the other. Going to be very interesting if Sesshomaru is around long enough for Inuyasha to experience a new moon. 

p.s- the lemon kind of made me uncomfortable. I personally couldn't understand why so early in the story she would have been so physically turned on to have allowed that vs, possibly taking care of it herself privately like he did. Especially considering their previous history with each other. I actually thought the lemon was a dream she had while on him and would wake up from, and that made sense, until I realized it wasn't. 


Lauren (Chapter 6) - Fri 17 Jan 2020

Funny scenes all around. But poor Inuyasha. So insecure about Sesshomaru.


Lauren (Chapter 5) - Fri 17 Jan 2020

Very rude. Jerk Sess is in caracter, so it fits. Cannot wait until your next installment


CraziGurl (Chapter 5) - Thu 16 Jan 2020

You will, I hope change him back at some point, right?


Kags (Chapter 5) - Wed 08 Jan 2020

Kudos! Thank you for the update!! The chapter didn’t disappoint! And I think you’ve written Sesshomaru rather well!! I like his jerk personality! He had his whole world come down.  So of course he’d be a bigger jerk thank before! Thanks again! 


Arc-an Angel (Chapter 5) - Wed 08 Jan 2020

Ya know, even though he definitely was a jerk, I appreciate that Kagome could hold her on. I would have felt much worse if she crumbled from it but the points you used (Inuyasha losing that demoness and then Rin) to redirect her back to what mattered/strengthened her spine was appreciated. I can understand why he needs to be this way right now though, because homeboy has a whole spiritual awakening he's about to go on as a human. He has a lot of misconceptions that literally only walking in someone else's shoes could illuminate.

 

Also, shout out to Kagome for knowing he wanted off lol!!!


FayeMegan (Chapter 4) - Wed 25 Dec 2019

I'm definitely hooked! Can't wait to see where this goes :D


Nilee1 (Chapter 4) - Mon 23 Dec 2019

OMG! They have to go find Rin. Like it or not they need Inuyasha and Kog-- Pride be damned.


Arc-an Angel (Chapter 4) - Mon 23 Dec 2019

Shorter than usual but still very much appreciated! Thank you for the update and Happy Holidays!


sesshomarupatrick (Chapter 3) - Wed 18 Dec 2019

I'm addicted to the way you describe him in a very fragile situation. Normally, he's a reliable Alpha, but in this fiction he's....XOX I know 'hot' and 'cute' are inappropriate words for a patient, but unfortunately he is. And quite gentlemanly. I want to see deeper and sweeter interactions between them, so I hope their sweetest Rin will spend some time with Shippo/Kirara/Kohaku/Poooooooorrrrrrr Jaken somewhere warm. I don't want her to get in trouble or catch a cold. ;<


Redleopord (Chapter 3) - Tue 17 Dec 2019

IIIIIIIII LIKE THISSSS!!!!!!!!!!


Mecca (Chapter 3) - Sat 14 Dec 2019

Ah, I love how they're trying to acclimate to each other during such an awkward sitch! And I can only imagine how Kagome must feel...! she must need a handy too after all that, but alas sleep was the overpowering inclination. Love it! Keep it coming! If you know what I mean! Also: I hope Rin isn't a poor popsicle somewhere O.o


Klee (Chapter 3) - Fri 13 Dec 2019

Wow. This is easily becoming a favorite. I love how you capture the Dynamics between them. I can't wait for the next chapter!


Arc-an Angel (Chapter 3) - Fri 13 Dec 2019

Yeeeeeeeeeeeesssssssssss! Ugh this story is so good. And the way you write is splendid. You do an excellent job of conveying the personalities of both Kagome and Sesshomaru, and I really am excited to see what happens next! Thank you for writing this story! P.s- they didn't even have sex and but this whole chapter was steamy as hell *faints*


Goldie Fawn (Chapter 3) - Fri 13 Dec 2019

Omg Susie, you're gonna kill me with how good this is. Just the right amount of intrigue and tension. Can't wait for more. :D 


Nallely (Chapter 3) - Fri 13 Dec 2019

This is so good, I will be expecting the new chapter, your writing is beautiful and the way you put Sesshomaru it's very close to what I imagine would be in the state he is now.


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